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bejeweled wings soar on a sultry summer day blossom gently falls Sponsored by Jamie Pan Its time for a little haiku contest Category – nature 01~11~17

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Date: 2/15/2017 6:51:00 PM
Beautiful, haikus are fun. So much said in so few words.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/15/2017 6:55:00 PM
I love the haiku form but never know if I have written a proper haiku or just a three line poem in the haiku form:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/18/2017 3:29:00 PM
Even without the pic, I get the picture which is what haiku is for. The blossom weakens under the wing power of many butterflies leaving. I like your pivot too, sultry contributes heat to the image. Congrats on your placement, I give it a 7.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/19/2017 11:05:00 AM
Thanks so much reason:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/15/2017 5:35:00 AM
LOL I thought I already had commented on your poem, Jan, but apparently I didn't... Congratulations my friend :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/15/2017 9:13:00 AM
Thanks Darren I was delighted to be on the list:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/14/2017 11:42:00 AM
Great summery imagery! Congrats on your win Jan! :-)
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Date: 1/14/2017 1:34:00 PM
Thanks Mark:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/12/2017 8:51:00 PM
wow, what a gorgeous picture you put with this lovely poem, Jan. Congrats to you.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/13/2017 11:23:00 AM
Thanks Andrea I was pleased to scrape onto the winners list with 10th place:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/12/2017 4:20:00 PM
Beautiful, Jan 7 for my friend!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/12/2017 4:40:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/12/2017 7:17:00 AM
oh beautiful Jan! Sultry summer days...lovely, congrats :) -luloo
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Date: 1/12/2017 12:13:00 PM
Thanks so much Luloo:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/12/2017 7:08:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Jan
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Date: 1/12/2017 12:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Joseph:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/12/2017 6:40:00 AM
Lovely poem, Jan. Congrats on the placement!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/12/2017 12:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Tamal:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/12/2017 4:01:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/12/2017 12:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Anne Lise:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/12/2017 12:24:00 AM
:) Amazing poem! Beautifully written. ~~~JWE
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Date: 1/12/2017 12:14:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it David:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/11/2017 8:58:00 PM
Congratulations Jan in the placement of the contest.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/12/2017 12:15:00 PM
Thanks so much Nayda:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/11/2017 6:00:00 PM
This is an amazing Haiku, creates wonderful images, definitely a winning poem. Brilliant Jan.
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Date: 1/12/2017 12:15:00 PM
Thanks so much Roy I got a 10th place:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/11/2017 5:58:00 PM
Superb dear, Jean! Good luck!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/12/2017 12:16:00 PM
Thanks so much Demetrios I do love writing about butterflies:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/11/2017 4:24:00 PM
Butterflies are an amazing part of creation... very nice Haiku!!! Hugs x
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/11/2017 4:36:00 PM
Hope you had a great Christmas and New year - loved your champagne poem!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/11/2017 3:53:00 PM
Awesome write likewise moving photography dear poet, a welcoming poetic muse helping the chilly bones of mine find warm and the happy hopes of an early Spring! Happy New Year to ya and may it be the prosperous one! Much love, james
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/11/2017 4:37:00 PM
Thanks James:-) Happy New Year:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/11/2017 12:04:00 PM
it's easy to tell you are in your element with this beautiful haiku Jan.
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 1/12/2017 4:50:00 AM
Indeed I have Jan. It's sad. Congratulations on your well deserved placement.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/11/2017 12:06:00 PM
Thanks Jean have you noticed there are fewer butterflies in the gardens recently:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/11/2017 11:08:00 AM
Very lovely Jan...great pic too
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/11/2017 11:36:00 AM
Thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/11/2017 10:12:00 AM
Beautiful Jan, you have captured this wondrous scene of nature perfectly.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/11/2017 11:38:00 AM
Thanks Chris I love butterflies, sadly we see fewer and fewer these days:-( hugs Jan xx