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Butterfly Ballet

the entry below is an Acrostic with a beginning and ending couplet attached "butterfly ballet" twas one day God said "let there be butterflies" they will grace heaven and earth along their skies butterflies waltz unveiled for all to see telling the world "take a look at me" every classic move resembles a ballet floating and gliding longing to be free yearning visible light bouncing to and fro along earth and sea let it be said let it be done everlasting is this flight the timeless butterfly ballet their story now told of glory so fine ballerinas grace to the end of time SkyWatcher - 05-21-17

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 5/24/2017 4:01:00 PM

I agree w/Lenna, a beautiful dance of the butterfly, Lisa. A poem eliciting themes of nature and faith is bound to be blessed. A wonderful bit of prose. Love always, dear.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/24/2017 7:51:00 PM

Good Evening Freddie. I hope this night finds you well. Thank you very much. I've always enjoyed the concept of the butterfly. Enjoy the night. I will see you on your page. Thank you again for such generosity.

Lenna Walker

Date: 5/24/2017 11:24:00 AM

Simply beautiful dance of the butterfly Jan !! So lovely you penned this :) hugs !!

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/24/2017 1:16:00 PM

Hello Lenna. Please forgive this short response. Thank you very much. I will see you soon on your page. Have a wonderful afternoon.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/24/2017 10:57:00 AM

The butterfly dances and sings on a delightful tune throughout your lines and makes its way straight to our heart:) Amitiés

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/24/2017 1:16:00 PM

Hi Anne-Marie. Please forgive this short response. Thank you so much. Have a wonderful afternoon. I will see you soon on your page. Thank you once again for the entry this morning. Honestly.

Maria Williams

Date: 5/24/2017 6:43:00 AM

Whenever I see butterflies I am reminded of my beautiful mother. You have really touched me on this one Lisa. A7++ and a fav... Maria

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/24/2017 1:15:00 PM

Hi Maria. Please forgive this short response. Thank you very much. Have a wonderful afternoon and night. I will see you soon on your page.

John Michaels

Date: 5/23/2017 5:37:00 PM

Such a beautiful piece, Lisa... truly worthy of the majestic titular creatures. A marvelous demonstration of the Acrostic form. Well done. Regards, John.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/24/2017 6:01:00 AM

Good Morning once again John. Thank you Thank you. I thought I would extend the entry a little with a beginning and ending couplet. Your review is most generous. Enjoy the morning and day. I will see you on your page.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/23/2017 3:19:00 PM

I like ballet, Lisa, and I have to agree with you that butterflies perform so gracefully. As for the form...an acrostic executed with ease, flowing smoothly like a butterfly in flight. #7 Regards // paul

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/24/2017 5:58:00 AM

Good Morning Paul. Thank you ever so much. Never do I take such generosity lightly. Honestly. I too like ballet and it is as graceful as a butterfly itself. Have a wonderful morning and day I will see you on your page.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/22/2017 12:29:00 PM

Absolutely exquisite Lisa I adore poems written about dragonflies and butterflies, your poem is so uplifting. The title is a perfect and I am adding this to my favourites:-)hugs jan xx7

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/22/2017 4:50:00 PM

Good Evening Jan. Thank you very much. I love the concept of the butterfly and what she stands for. Thank you also for mentioning the title for I enjoy titles too. Your review is most generous Jan. Have a wonderful night. I will see you on your page.

Darren White

Date: 5/22/2017 8:27:00 AM

I can see them glide and dance together, so wonderful and beautiful with their loud clours and soft beings. Beautiful uplifting poem my friend :)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/22/2017 9:08:00 AM

Hi Penguin. Thank you so much. Gotta love the concept of butterflies and all their essence and being. I know I do. Your review is marvelous and generous to which I do not take for granted. Have a wonderful afternoon and I will see you on your page.

Chris Green

Date: 5/22/2017 8:09:00 AM

Another happy and wonderful poem to read this morning. I have butterflies and hummingbirds every where in my yard. And like your amazing poem states, it is like watching a ballet and it seems based on the inspiration you have found, this butterfly ballet is also, poetry in motion. Beautiful Lisa, simply beautiful.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/22/2017 9:04:00 AM

Morning Chris. You are blessed with your surroundings. What's even more grand is that you know it and you embrace it.... Thank you so much for your continued support and generosity. Honestly. May that ballet always be. Have a wonderful rest of the morning. I will see you on your page. And yes, enjoy your surroundings and yard for how grand is that. Very