Butterfly (A Revision)
Open up
I say to thee
obey the voice
of destiny
awaken now*
to summers fare*
and taste the fragrance
in the air
awaken
out of long remiss
lay aside thy chrysalis
Open up
I beg of thee
open...
open sesame!
* these two lines revised
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