Butterfly

An inchworm has measured another May now descends into June's cocoon to emerge as butterfly July Fire crimson and emerald born from an ashen sky

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Date: 6/20/2017 1:13:00 PM

Hey Dale wonderful personification - I sure love to see butterfly July bring colour and beauty to our world:-) hugs Jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/20/2017 2:37:00 PM

Thanks, Jan.

Date: 6/20/2017 11:25:00 AM

Wonderful personification of the season change, Dale. The change is a lot like the metamorphosis of a butterfly. Ingenious:)

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/20/2017 11:46:00 AM

Thank you very much, Daniel.

Date: 6/20/2017 11:20:00 AM

Perfectly done Dale. Very nice :)

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/20/2017 11:25:00 AM

Thanks, Heidi, I appreciate that.

Date: 6/20/2017 11:11:00 AM

Beautifully crafted. This has the feel of the warmer seasons. A nice May, a bit warmer in June and then a blazing (fire crimson) July flutters in.

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/20/2017 11:17:00 AM

Thanks, Chris. We're almost there.