Eve Roper Poet Shape

Butterfly

o                                                  o
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First           `                                   ’           I saw
upon                    `         ’                     golden
fields                      of                     daisies
you subsist on                 @_@                    attractions of
sweetest                        buds                           abloom
enticing brilliant
with      ((     ))   colour
dancing taste               ((    ))                  of nectar on
 flowers, you                   > ((    )) <               flutter and play
amused by the                  ((    ))                      sun and sky
amid flight wings                             ((    ))                                love with grace
glowing Adour charm                ((   ))                     you take my heart
kiss the                                              (())                                            buds free
you go                                                                                   and come 
(o)                                                                                       (o)


11/18/2016

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Anne-Lise Andresen November 20, 2016 at 12:50 PM - It's beautiful, Eve (.... and difficult) - A lovely poem (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Eve Roper November 20, 2016 at 1:05 PM Thank you for looking at it, Anne-Lise you have inspired me to create in shape form. Hugs Eve

Jean Murray November 20, 2016 at 12:26 PM So well done Eve. Such a lovely poem. Eve Roper November 20, 2016 at 1:06 PM Jean, thank you. I had fun doing this piece Hugs eve

Vera Duggan November 20, 2016 at 4:02 AM Hi Eve, perfect butterfly shape and words, how clever you are, I wouldn't even attempt to do something like that, it must have taken you ages to write this, take care.....Vera

Joanna Daniel November 19, 2016 at 9:07 AM Oh, this one is outstanding, Eve:) a 10:) Eve Roper November 19, 2016 at 1:30 PM Thank you, Jo Hugs Eve

Richard Lamoureux November 19, 2016 at 9:00 AM This is so cool! You put a lot of thought into this piece. You are an artist. Eve Roper November 19, 2016 at 2:04 PM Thank you so much, Richard, Hugs Eve

Lin Lane November 19, 2016 at 5:35 AM Dear Eve, I admire your delicate words on the butterfly but also the time it took for you to illustrate the image. Your artistic skills are greatly in evidence...It's a beauty. Eve Roper November 19, 2016 at 2:06 PM Thank you so much, Lin, hugs eve

Demetrios Trifiatis November 19, 2016 at 1:57 AM Stunning concept and execution dear , Eve. A seven.

Supraja Kannan November 19, 2016 at 12:33 AM Wow..This is great and beautiful...Lovely shape and words... You did a great job.. A big 7... Eve Roper November 19, 2016 at 5:53 PM Thank you, Supraja for the compliment and the 7 Hugs Eve

Arthur Vaso November 19, 2016 at 12:32 AM I so loved this eve, your beauty shines with this poetry!!!! Hugs!!