Butterfly

o o ` ‘ First ` ’ I saw upon ` ’ golden fields of daisies you subsist on @_@ attractions of sweetest buds abloom enticing brilliant with (( )) colour dancing taste (( )) of nectar on flowers, you > (( )) < flutter and play amused by the (( )) sun and sky amid flight wings (( )) love with grace glowing Adour charm (( )) you take my heart kiss the (()) buds free you go and come (o) (o) 11/18/2016

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2016 12:50:00 PM

- It's beautiful, Eve (.... and difficult) - A lovely poem (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper
Date: 11/20/2016 1:05:00 PM

Thank you for looking at it, Anne-Lise you have inspired me to create in shape form. Hugs Eve

Jean Murray

Date: 11/20/2016 12:26:00 PM

So well done Eve. Such a lovely poem.

Eve Roper
Date: 11/20/2016 1:06:00 PM

Jean, thank you. I had fun doing this piece Hugs eve

Vera Duggan

Date: 11/20/2016 4:02:00 AM

Hi Eve, perfect butterfly shape and words, how clever you are, I wouldn't even attempt to do something like that, it must have taken you ages to write this, take care.....Vera

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/19/2016 9:07:00 AM

Oh, this one is outstanding, Eve:) a 10:)

Eve Roper
Date: 11/19/2016 1:30:00 PM

Thank you, Jo Hugs Eve

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/19/2016 9:00:00 AM

This is so cool! You put a lot of thought into this piece. You are an artist.

Eve Roper
Date: 11/19/2016 2:04:00 PM

Thank you so much, Richard, Hugs Eve

Lin Lane

Date: 11/19/2016 5:35:00 AM

Dear Eve, I admire your delicate words on the butterfly but also the time it took for you to illustrate the image. Your artistic skills are greatly in evidence...It's a beauty.

Eve Roper
Date: 11/19/2016 2:06:00 PM

Thank you so much, Lin, hugs eve