Butterfly

Her nature was gentle, and as soft as the rain
A butterfly so fragile, with procelin skin
Fragrant blossom, nectar sweet
Bathed in humbled innocence...
Entrapment came regaled in white 
With western charms, this wasp would sting
He picked this budding branch with false intent
His kisses spent, upon her dainty cheeks
So into bliss she flew, caught by wily arms
and promises of love, with no intent to keep
With fickle breath he stole her heart
And played the part without a thought, without a care
He was an actor upon this stage....the cage
a nuptial made as thin as air

He said farewell, with lies and smiles
To sail awhile, across the rolling seas
Leaving needles in her heart
Her frail wings pierced upon the day
And when those falsehoods sailed, her love impaled
While far away, he spent his charms in other arms

Her face would stare upon the tides
Her eyes would cry soliloquies
Her song would yearn...would he return?  
Her trust swept into waves...
And then a year or more would pass, 
The child she bore, stood by her side...
And still love lasts, and while she waits, the ocean breeze
would carry on,  those restless seas, the haunting song ....
Would carry on and on....she calls.........she calls his name...

With futile hopes to ease her pain
Her shame to learn the truth, and then to finally learn
Another shore......another bride!!
Another shore......another bed......to learn such truth...the final dread!
She cannot lift her head...the loss....the pain.....! OH! Hide thy face!
Oh! Such disgrace...an honor black with shame
What cannot be erased.......too much is dead!

Her death will free the fragile wings
Upon her knees, the final bend
By her own hand......her father's knife
Will take the life of Butterfly.                         BUTTERFLY!!      Butterfly!        ....butterfly!....


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("Man's love of his life a thing apart............'Tis woman's whole existence")

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/10/2010 4:48:00 PM
Yike I don't know how he picked who would be #1 all of you are equally excellent! As always I love your uniquely individual take on a theme. My fav lines are "Her eyes would cry soliloquies"..made me want to launch into a version of Mandy! ;) Congrad's hon. Light & Love
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Date: 12/7/2010 9:48:00 PM
big cheers for the award, carrie.. cherish this moment!! huggs, nette
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Date: 12/6/2010 12:57:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your top win in John's super contest with this brilliant write and win.. enjoy another sweet victory with luv and so happy to be sharing third with u my friend..
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Date: 12/6/2010 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's "Jaded Partitions" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest..Sara
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Date: 12/6/2010 1:51:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of jared, Carrie
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Date: 11/30/2010 9:06:00 AM
Great one..Love the last line..Great emotive and descriptive work..I was delighted that you stopped by my work and commented...Sara
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Date: 11/30/2010 7:11:00 AM
You have such a touchy emotional thoughts today, carrie
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Date: 11/30/2010 4:50:00 AM
Had to wipe my tears away. Oh Carrie this is so amazing. But I always expect this from you. Just when I believe you can not write any better you simply amaze me and out do yourself once again. Thank you for sharing and if for a contest I see a winner. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2010 8:01:00 PM
Spectacular Carrie.. a magnificent poem from u tonight.. if for any of the current contests .. like John or BG .. good luck my friend.. this is so moving ...
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Date: 11/29/2010 1:25:00 PM
Hello Carrie, Bravo! This is one of the best poems I have read in a very long time. Wonderful, also happens to be my favorite Opera. As Always, Shar
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Date: 11/29/2010 12:26:00 PM
Brilliant, Carrie!! There are too many "actors" (or players) out there who pay no heed to the needs of butterflies they wound with their deceit. Wishing you success in John's contest! And where did you get that incredible quote at the end? I bet it was written by a woman. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/29/2010 12:07:00 PM
a tragic scene painted with your piercingly eloquent words and images... much luck in the contest, carrie! warmest, nette
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