Butterfly

Tiny butterfly
Float upon a puff of wind
Mesmerize mankind

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Andrea Dietrich

March 10, 2011 at 12:05 AM

sweet as can be, Ray!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

October 24, 2010 at 8:32 AM

amazing really how something small can be such a thing to mesmerize us-- another wonderful write on butterflies :) -- nikko :)

Brandee Augustus

June 10, 2010 at 12:46 PM

I think we can all forget about the tiny creations and miracles that God has made and consider it average and everyday. Congratulations on this poem of remembering small miracles.

Andrea Dietrich

June 5, 2010 at 9:20 PM

awesome entry, RAy. Congratulations. Luv, andrea

Jimmy Anderson

June 4, 2010 at 12:48 PM

Love butterflies! Thanks for the comments on my poem, "Catalina and Me"...and yes, I love "Paso" by Marty Robbins...later, JA

Gert W. Knop

June 3, 2010 at 6:27 AM

Congrats on your win with this nice Haiku, Ray! Enjoyed reading it this afternoon and thank you for comment...Have a nice time!...Gert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 2, 2010 at 3:34 PM

Very nice Ray and congrats on your win in Haiku You contest... my entry did not make it this time but happy to see so many of my friends winning ...enjoy ... luv.. "Sweetheart"