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Butterfly

Tiny butterfly Float upon a puff of wind Mesmerize mankind

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2011 12:05:00 AM

sweet as can be, Ray!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/24/2010 8:32:00 AM

amazing really how something small can be such a thing to mesmerize us-- another wonderful write on butterflies :) -- nikko :)

Brandee Augustus

Date: 6/10/2010 12:46:00 PM

I think we can all forget about the tiny creations and miracles that God has made and consider it average and everyday. Congratulations on this poem of remembering small miracles.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2010 9:20:00 PM

awesome entry, RAy. Congratulations. Luv, andrea

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 6/4/2010 12:48:00 PM

Love butterflies! Thanks for the comments on my poem, "Catalina and Me"...and yes, I love "Paso" by Marty Robbins...later, JA

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/3/2010 6:27:00 AM

Congrats on your win with this nice Haiku, Ray! Enjoyed reading it this afternoon and thank you for comment...Have a nice time!...Gert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/2/2010 3:34:00 PM

Very nice Ray and congrats on your win in Haiku You contest... my entry did not make it this time but happy to see so many of my friends winning ...enjoy ... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/2/2010 2:40:00 PM

Ray, a winner! congrats to you..I hope you are enjoying the soup..keep posting. This little piece really is a gem. BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/2/2010 12:02:00 PM

I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Ray. Hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol

Rauwolfia Ra

Date: 6/2/2010 5:55:00 AM

That's really true, like a little child always like to chase a butterfly, I use to do that a lot.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/1/2010 10:08:00 PM

A wonderful entry - nice thought with apt images

Date: 6/1/2010 4:04:00 PM

Nice use of imagery for an interesting view. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Keep on writing. Karen