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Flutter by, butterfly, sailing on the breeze, you can see eternity, as you float above the trees Butterfly, high above, as the zephyr sings, how I love the flicker of your gossamer silk wings Captured in the cage of my cocoon - not the life I had planned, tied by ropes of choices I have made, who will unbind my hand? Floating by, butterfly, on a sky blue sea, catch the wind with wingéd sails that set your spirit free Butterfly, rising high, far beyond my reach. Is the span between our souls one I could ever breach? Captured in the prison of this life - trapped forever it seems, will I ever be the butterfly soaring high in my dreams? Flutter by, butterfly, floating on the breeze, do you see my liberty, can you set my soul at ease? Just as I bid goodbye to this lonely land, You turn unexpectedly and alight upon my hand, Butterfly.

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Date: 11/24/2020 10:00:00 AM
Butterfly enjoyed the warmth of your heart and hand - a superb write dear friend - your creativity superb, your inspiration evident and your imagination brilliant, a fave. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/24/2020 1:43:00 PM
Very kind of you to say so, Jenn. You are always so affirming and it means a lot to me. Hugs and blessings ~ John
Date: 11/22/2020 6:21:00 PM
Lovely imagery, John, with a touch of romance.
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Date: 11/22/2020 8:26:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. I value this comment because your imagery is always so vivid and unique ~ John
Date: 11/22/2020 5:43:00 PM
oh wow, that last part is SO awesome, John. That just made the whole thing so perfect. I see you were tapping into teenage angst!!! Happy holidays. We have seven days left of it!!
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Date: 11/22/2020 8:26:00 PM
Yay for time off of work, and for Thanksgiving day! Thank you for the lovely comment, Andrea.
Date: 11/22/2020 9:11:00 AM
Very nice this lyric you've created John, the butterfly is a fitting symbol of the transience of life, loved the refrain!
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Date: 11/22/2020 10:19:00 AM
Thank you, John. Coming from a lyricist, this comment is extra special. This was my first 'serious' lyric, tapping into a lot of teenage angst. I'm glad you appreciated it. Enjoy your Sunday and your Thanksgiving week ~ John
Date: 11/22/2020 5:33:00 AM
This is a delicious dream unfolding in my spirit... so light and alive with loving feeling. A inspiration and joy! I love it. A fave for sure. God bless you my friend
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Date: 11/22/2020 10:17:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend. For the fave and all the positive warmth that comes my way from you. Enjoy your Sunday and your Thanksgiving week ~ John
Date: 11/22/2020 1:31:00 AM
I love your thought provoking write, John, it's enchanting:)
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Date: 11/22/2020 10:16:00 AM
Jo, thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this. I appreciate your support and encouragement over the years ~ John

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