Butterfly

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blue beauty befriends beast, belies belief! but better be beware brave butterfly cruel chameleon can change colour clasping cat claws could cause crude chainsaw cuts picture 3 Double tetractyls contest N/A 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1 syllables Checked at www.howmanysyllables.com Sponsor Eve Roper Date written 20/08/20

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Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 8/25/2020 11:03:00 AM

Awesome alliteration with meaning too.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/25/2020 11:06:00 AM

Thank you Rama, so pleased you visited my page and thanks for your kind comments!

John Watt

Date: 8/21/2020 10:20:00 AM

Agree with Jan, was about to say how hard the double tetractys is anyway, but to add to it your B and C words is amazing. Well done, a winner to me, Krish.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/21/2020 11:24:00 AM

Thanks John! So pleased you like it! Always a pleasure to hear from you my friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/20/2020 2:48:00 PM

what awesome alliteration in an already challenging form!:-) hugs jan xx

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/20/2020 3:03:00 PM

Thanks Jan! Thanks for your kind words!!:)