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Butterflies Scatter In Playful Grace

I saunter surrounded by an array
of graceful movement in a wet meadow
fluttering  blue butterflies, so I lay
s-t-r-e-t-c-h-i-n-g to play with a swipe of my paws


Of graceful movement in a wet meadow
butterflies elude with beauty and grace
s-t-r-e-t-c-h-i-n-g to play with a swipe of my paws
as they scatter and fly away in space


Butterflies elude with beauty and grace
fluttering  blue butterflies, so I lay
as they scatter and fly away in space
I saunter surrounded by an array


3/8/2016

The poem above was a revise from my poem;

                                                  Meadow Of Blue

                                     I saunter surrounded by an array
                                           of graceful movement  a
                                           meadow of blue, so I lay
                                              and stretch to play
                                       as they scatter and fly away

3/29/2015

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Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 7:59 PM
Checking out one of your pantoum examples. It's a gem!! I like the cute little poem created at the end from it too.
Roper Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 8:40 PM
Thank you, Andrea, I'm glad you came back and read my poem always glad :)
Palli Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Love this, Sandra. Congrats!
Andresen Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 9:10 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful poem, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Davey Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 5:34 PM
Really creative write and format! Congratulations on your placement
Roper Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 8:49 PM
Thank you, Brian.Hugs
Haight Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 4:56 PM
Adorable and nicely written, Eve. Also, I love cats, and your 's-t-r-e-t-c-h-i-n-g' word that really put the kitty right inside your poem! Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 8:48 PM
Thank you, Sandra, it felt good to enter one of my examples in the contest. Hugs
Hicks Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 11:05 PM
This was delightful, Eve. A great revision I think. The visual effect of "s-t-r-e-t-c-h-i-n-g", helped aid the pictures in my head. You do really well in this form.
Allison Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 4:46 PM
I must get my thinking cap on and write a poem for the contest - this is delightful Eve:-) hugs Jan xx7
Onclaud Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 11:13 AM
very enchanting, eve... well done, i must say!..huggs
Vaso Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 12:40 AM
Oh my so beautiful, loved the image with this too! Hugs!
Roper Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Thank you, Arthur! Hugs dear friend
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