Butterflies of Snow: Hexsonnetta

Lightly flutter snowflakes
as on the breeze they go,
these butterflies of snow.
Spiderwebs the frost makes
when the pewter day breaks
to snare them as they blow.

This window the webs ring
the porthole in the frost
on which the flecks are tossed
is tatted like the wings
of earwigs in the spring.
The glass becomes embossed

with ornaments of ice 
and blooms of edelweiss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 4:57 PM
I can see the pewter sky breaking!..Great visual. Glad I met you. Congrats.
Cozart Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 5:08 PM
Thanks for reading, Barbara!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 12:00 PM
I enjoyed this even more on second reading Dale. Congratulations on your second place win with this gem. It is going into my Faves! : )
Cozart Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 12:26 PM
Thank you so very much, Connie!
Gauthier Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 11:57 PM
Superbly done, Dale. A well deserved win. Bravo.
Cozart Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Thanks you, Line!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 10:06 PM
Gorgeous imagery, silky smooth eloquent, just wonderful Dale. Congratulations on your win! xomo
Cozart Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Thanks so much, Maureen!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 7:59 PM
So beautiful! Fave! Congrats!
Cozart Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 8:07 PM
Thanks so much, Kim!
Barden Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 9:59 AM
Gorgeous, write, Dale! I am a "newbie" to poetry, and just beginning to work on, (and learn with competency), the many forms and their details and nuances. You have a mastery of so many, and you are one of my primary resources for style and form. I never wrote a Sonnet until about a week ago, (sadly), and I am beginning to understand why they are so popular (to write) with other poets, and the Hexsonnetta is particularly beautiful - THIS one exquisite! Thanks for letting me "learn" from you!
Cozart Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 10:06 AM
Thanks, Greg. I am still learning myself and only began studying the various forms six or seven months ago.
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 7:24 PM
This is gorgeous and I enjoy seeing the hexsonnetta so well executed by a sonneteer such as yourself. Thanks what you said about my sonnets being down to earth. AT least half of my sonnets are that way. I just love using the sonnet meter to tell a tale or to make an ordinary situation seem just a bit less ordinary.
Cozart Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 7:33 PM
Thanks, Andrea! I don't think anyone's sonnets are as accessible to readers as yours.
Ashley Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Your imagery and rhymes sparkle Dale. Beautifully done.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 7:54 AM
Thanks, Susan!
Adams Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 9:38 PM
I really like this Dale. It's very descriptive and puts you in the moment. Very nice!!
Cozart Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 7:54 AM
Thanks a lot, Pat! Good to hear from you!
One Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 1:36 PM
This is brilliant, you do this form so well..
Cozart Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 1:37 PM
Thanks so much!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 1:33 PM
You compliment Andrea's form beautifully with your well chosen words Dale. I am sure she will appreciate this as much as I do! Lovely! : )
Cozart Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 1:35 PM
Thanks, Connie!
Andresen Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 12:45 PM
- A beautiful sonnet, Dale ... with two awesome end lines :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cozart Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 12:48 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise!
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