James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Butterflies Flutter By

A Butterfly flutters by
On a summers breeze
The flutter by Butterflies
With delightfully winged ease
 
To watch the Butterflies flutter by
Leaves me in total awe
To witness all the butterflies fluttering by
Would just be totally braw
 
To all the Butterfly flutter by fans
On the Soup today
If you see a flutter by, by a Butterfly
Think of this poem and me

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Michelle Mac Donald July 13, 2009 at 9:03 PM Hey James!! Butterflies..metamorphosis..transitions...motion..beauty... Thank you for drawing my attention to this lovely write. :) It brushes against my mind...makes my thoughts flutter, and my eyes tear. You'll have no idea what I'm talking about LOL. I can say that for a few moments this piece has made me feel touched and blessed. Thank you! Best to you and yours...God bless!! Mikki

John Freeman July 13, 2009 at 8:56 PM Vivid, James I could see those butterflys. The " My Soul's Journey " is bio, about my own soul's spiritual journey in the mind, and back into the heart of love again! Some times these types of poems from my heart go on, for a while. Lol, God bless jm

James Peranteau July 12, 2009 at 9:55 AM Oh there are plenty fluttering in mine blessed garden today Mr. Faser ! ,..and I'll surly ponder on this fantastical write !!! james

Charmaine Chircop July 12, 2009 at 5:39 AM beautiful write-----charma

Frances King July 11, 2009 at 4:37 PM Great fun James! We're seeing quite a few more butterflies here in Somerset than last year, thank Heavens ... How about Bonnie Scotland?

Illyanna De La Keur July 11, 2009 at 4:29 PM I LOVE butterflies!!! This is beautiful!!

Sara Kendrick July 11, 2009 at 3:59 PM That is a tongue twister. I would hate to have to read it aloud. Delightful. Sara