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November 21, 2023

"In The Midddle Of Night Butterflies Dance To The Moon's Song" Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

FIRST  PLACE

 

Butterflies Dance To Moon

A forlorn maiden wakes up in the middle of the night, 
                  Heart aches with longing…
For the young man who had to leave her
                   For an unknown destination,
Glorious midnight Moon shines at the centre of the sky,
                      Alone and magnificent!
                   Singing to the glittering stars,
A song of solitude, of passion, of heartbreaking emotion !
The melodia floats in ethereal harmony on the wings of butterflies! 

They dance to the tune of that song,
A multitude of them encompassing the horizon,
Colourful bodies emanating euphoria-
Radiating rainbow colours all around!
Ecstatic, transformed into gorgeous creatures...
Their joy, exultation sublime, creates
Poignant movements so surreal,

Moon invites them to join that refrain,
And wipe away the melancholy from the maiden’s
Tearful eyes!

What a magical extravaganza created !
Butterflies sprinkled with shimmering stardust,
Moon savouring their spirited sprightliness…
A damsel awestruck with the blessing of a miraculous sight!
A few moments of rejuvenation for her…
She dreams of being with her lover!
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 21, 2023 at 6:39 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely/wonderful write/story. Merry Christmas..........
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 21, 2023 at 6:58 AM
Thank you, Paula. Merry Christmas to you!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 2:23 PM
What a great entry for the contest. I suspect it will do well. Thanks for you visit and thoughtful comment.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 3:28 PM
Thank you for your comment, Dear Richard. Always look forward to reading your powerful poems. Your visit is truly appreciated.
Proxenos Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 7:56 AM
Congratulations dear friend on your inclusion of your awesome poetry in Poetry Soups third Anthology - Reflections on the Important Things. Blessings, Jennifer.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 3:26 PM
Thank you so much, Dear Jennifer. Your comments are really appreciated. I haven't got the Anthology yet, will get soon. Will look forward to read your beautiful poems, Dear Poet. Love ~
Roper Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 8:25 PM
Lovely write, Malabika, full of sparkling imagery and feelings throughout each line. The loneliness of the young lady waiting alone till her love returns.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 3:24 PM
Dear Eve, Thank you so much. Your comments are valuable, and really appreciated. Hope you had a great Thanksgiving weekend!
One Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 12:28 PM
A captivating and imaginative poetic storytelling.. love the scene you set here and how you used the moon to create a wonderful poem.. an enjoyable read.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 1:25 PM
Dear SO, so inspiring to hear encouraging words from you! There are some super talented poets (you are one) at this site - I am trying to learn from them. There was a huge gap in my life when I had no connection with literary world. I feel fortunate to be here! Best wishes, always, Dear Poet!
Empress Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 6:47 AM
Ethereal and magical how you’ve written this not just with mellifluous diction, but also imagery and alliterations that flow in such a captivating manner. I especially loved the opening lines in this and also how you’ve written “ She dreams of being with her lover!“ ah evocative ending. Loved this. Sending you light always
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 6:57 AM
Dearest Poet-friend, you have made me ecstatic with joy with your beautiful insightful comment! I wouldn’t be able to continue my learning journey without all of you supporting! Love and hugs, Dear Poetess!
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