Butterflies Dance

looking at your smile makes my heart sing,
 while my wild butterflies dance~

5/1/21

Contest: "The Way You Look at Me" poetry contest
Sponsor: JCB Brul
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Allison Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 9:37 AM
what a charming poem Tania, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Thank you Jan! hugs
Gauthier Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 7:32 AM
Oh ~ beautiful, Tania
Kitchin Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Thank you Line!
Y. Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 3:39 AM
Hi Tania, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Kitchin Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Thank you Alexis!
Alex Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 11:34 PM
Congratulations!
Kitchin Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Thank you!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 11:29 PM
Romance in full peak. May I have this dance :)
Kitchin Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 4:29 AM
Thank you Victor!
Mcintosh Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 6:23 PM
Lovely. God bless you always. Love, Gina
Kitchin Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 6:31 PM
Thank you Gina!
Cunningham Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 2:41 PM
Very romantic Tania, best of luck in the contest. Hope you've settled in your new job okay. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 2:42 PM
Thank you Tom, and it's a huge learning curve right now!
Gauthier Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 7:41 AM
nice one ~ very sweet
Kitchin Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 8:39 AM
Thank you Line!
Sands Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 6:59 AM
I love this beautiful poem :)
Kitchin Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 8:40 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Y. Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 4:50 AM
WoW! Tania, This is a great entry for the contest theme. “ Wild butterflies dance” was so good. Congrats in advance. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Kitchin Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 8:40 AM
Thank you Alexis! hugs
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