Butterflies, Butterflies

Playing way in grandmas pungent garden green, Amidst sprays of scarlet marigolds and in between. Just above me. Ah, far enough they come from. Too high for me to reach and try to catch them. Caterpillars turned into colorful butterflies, Fluttering in graceful group in periwinkle skies. My body holding me up guiding me aright, Trying hard to catch; I hold very still in delight. I stretch to play as they scatter and fly away. Round, round, up, and down still with me they stay. Oh, butterflies, can't be afraid. I mean you, no harm. They flutter, come quite close, one lights on my arm. It tickled as it's wings slowly goes up and down. It didn't stay long; I didn't know if to smile or frown. Butterflies, butterflies swarm; all different colors Across the garden of marigolds with all the others. 10/2/2019 Poetry Contest: Writing Challenge, October - Butterfly Sponsored by: Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
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La France Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 7:18 PM
Eve congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem and I love your image too!
Allison Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 4:10 PM
Such a charming poem and I love the picture too eve, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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October 6, 2019 at 11:36 AM
- Beautifully described, Eve ... congratulations on your winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 11:42 PM
Congratulations for your win Eve :)
Callus Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 12:49 PM
Yours is such a charming poem, Eve! Butterflies catch both our attention and imagination. gl in the contest. Hugs // paul
Sands Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 8:27 AM
Beautiful Eve. Very sweet :)
Green Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 8:14 AM
This was an absolute joy to read Eve. You have captured the innocence of childhood and the beauty of nature perfectly. Best wishes in the contest.
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October 3, 2019 at 6:49 AM
The joy in the children's eyes as they gaze and chase the butterfly.. wonderful Eve
Andresen Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 2:26 AM
- Little moments of wonder and joy ... a beautiful poem, Eve - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 12:27 AM
The ending couplet is beautiful ... Enjoyed reading your lovely poem, Eve ...
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October 2, 2019 at 10:54 PM
I can remember doing this too... catching them and holding them for a while. I loved the butterflies and still do. Your poem is wonderful and a winner for sure. Bless you dear friend
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