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Butterflies and Flowers

endless and breathless, a seasonal sensation curls me in bliss, as butterflies and flowers caress - it’s the magic of majestic moments, and i am desiring this devoted destination, of summer sun-kissed skin, bountiful blooms softly dipped - a playful pathway of delicate daisies swaying and serenading - then, the melody of the wind whispers low, beauty collides causing butterflies and flowers to take a bow and disappear, while nature embraces autumn’s kiss and temps that rearrange - it’s the end of summertime’s soft, soothing melody pumpkin spice dances sweetly in the air, expanding the imagination beyond the sky - as leaves become a paintbrush, curling me in bliss - this seasonal sensation is breathless, endless
________________ * Just a little scribble * Embracing the Moments Form of poetry: 1-10 words and 10-1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Treacher Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 11:17 PM
This is so beautiful as it visually and lyrically swells on the page and then closes back in like a flower unfurling, or as a butterfly lifts off and disappears.
Nicole Avatar
April 5, 2026 at 4:20 PM
Dearest Rachel, I'm in complete awe with your thought about how this poem opens and then closes like a flower. I've never looked at it in this way. So beautiful, indeed. Thank you so much for this lovely comment and compliment, my sweet friend. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Strand Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 12:50 AM
The melacholy elegance of Fall Brandy
Nicole Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 6:00 PM
Thank you, Brian. I love both, butterflies and flowers. This time of year they disappear, but they will be back again in the Spring. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy
Wolves Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 5:10 AM
Wow I have missed some golden pleasures.... as from your pen flow awesome treasures....
Nicole Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 4:30 PM
Such a sweet thing to say. Soft and poetic. Thank you Robert. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Zahid Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 1:18 PM
That's a beautiful write girl! Loved it
Nicole Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 8:40 PM
Oh my !!! Thank you Paghunda. Such a wonderful thing to say. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy
May Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 6:44 PM
I love how the seasons "curl you in bliss" Brandy, Beautiful write
Nicole Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 8:03 PM
Thank you Joseph. It is bliss wrapping the seasons around me in this way. I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Brandy
Mohn Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 8:55 PM
the building and then the fading...beautifully written and shaped
Nicole Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 12:01 PM
Such a beautiful comment. Thank you David. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Mcintosh Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 5:31 AM
Beautifully done, sweet lady. God bless you
Nicole Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 9:08 AM
You are so kind. Thank you Regina. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Michael Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 4:56 PM
I like how you meshed into the autumn...a weave of beauty and love...Nice one
Nicole Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 7:00 PM
I enjoyed creating this seasonal sensation. Thank you Arturo. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy
Mumo Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 1:59 PM
Your little scribbles are more than mere commonplace sketchings, doubtless. They're packed with vivid imagerical sounds and scenes dipped in unalloyed nature's vast wealth of unadulterated pulchritude...wherein their distinguished poetic beauty and obvious skill perch unbeatable yet, and so romantically sweet to the rhythm-discerning ear. Kudos!
Nicole Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 6:56 PM
So kind of you to say. Thank you Hannington, for such a wonderful comment. I am always writing from the heart. Embracing the season in this way, through words, is amazing. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
One Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 1:45 PM
Such lovely imagery... You described it so beautifully...
Nicole Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 6:45 PM
Thank you Silent One. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Wolf Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 11:32 AM
NOW I understand why I have to wait so long between writes.... The wait is worth it... You have really crafted and shaped this so beautifully, Brandy. Bliss! Bravo, Gershon
Nicole Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 6:17 PM
As they say, good things come to those who wait. Oh my !! Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. They humble me. Thank you Gershon. Such a wonderful compliment. :) Brandy
Sharp Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 6:08 AM
A sensory feast, Branderz !
Nicole Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 6:00 PM
Thank you Lawrence. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 7:05 PM
The butterflies and buttercups will soon take their final bow for 2020 to make way for the crimson leaves...and time marches on. I like the beautiful imagery in this seasonal poem, Brandy. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs, John
Nicole Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 7:50 PM
Yes, they will. With that being said, I am curling each and every sweet moment around me, as the seasons whisper to each other. Thank you John, for your kind words and your support. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Leiser Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 2:02 PM
You spin words in a sweet, seductive way that grabs one’s attention, Brandy! Beautifully written! Enjoyed this one! :)
Nicole Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 7:01 PM
There is something about when summer touches autumn, that creates such a beautiful mood for me. :) Shows in this poem. Thank you Laura for your wonderful comment. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 1:04 PM
Indeed the magic of moments when seasons mesmerize us..as does your poem in colorful language of autumn's welcome. I liked the journey through your paintbrush my friend--lovely write, Brandy.
Nicole Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 6:50 PM
Yes, it is about that time of year again. Vivid images and tender moments. Leaves dancing as vibrant colors collide. Thank you Vijay. I appreciate you and your kind thoughts. :) Brandy
Leffanta Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 12:25 PM
Well done! Aloha! Rico
Nicole Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 6:10 PM
Thank you Rico ! Embracing these moments, I am. :) Brandy
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