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Butterflies

Light streaming in to bind us Intertwined in love so sweet The buzz in my body aches Hiding from the world.

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Mohammad Yamin

Date: 8/8/2011 8:41:00 PM

Congratulations, Kristen, on your charming poem winning the first round. Wish you good luck in the finals. -Mohammad

Audrey Haick

Date: 8/5/2011 3:54:00 PM

Kristen, Congratulations on your beautiful Dodoitsu making it to the First Rounds of PS's Intl. Contest! Love, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/2/2011 11:17:00 PM

Congrats Kristen on this poem making it to first round of PS competition luv..g.l...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/2/2011 10:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Kristen. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 8/2/2011 8:53:00 AM

K risten,Congratulations on your poems' capture of the first round. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/13/2011 9:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week Kristen. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Daver Austin

Date: 1/12/2011 1:16:00 PM

The last two lines add mystery. Enjoyed. Congrats on this selection. Dave

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/9/2011 6:28:00 PM

Congrats Kristen on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all today with luv..

Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 1/9/2011 5:46:00 PM

congrats on being featured. this was a most interesting poem to read. i felt it. well written. --Madison

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/9/2011 2:49:00 PM

yes the feeling makes us feel young and in love:), enjoyed your sweet write,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/9/2011 12:37:00 PM

Nice jouci and sensual write for the contest, Good luck, kristen