Butterflies

Light streaming in to bind us
Intertwined in love so sweet
The buzz in my body aches
Hiding from the world.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Yamin Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 8:41 PM
Congratulations, Kristen, on your charming poem winning the first round. Wish you good luck in the finals. -Mohammad
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August 5, 2011 at 3:54 PM
Kristen, Congratulations on your beautiful Dodoitsu making it to the First Rounds of PS's Intl. Contest! Love, Annalise
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August 2, 2011 at 11:17 PM
Congrats Kristen on this poem making it to first round of PS competition luv..g.l...
Brown Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 10:25 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Kristen. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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August 2, 2011 at 8:53 AM
K risten,Congratulations on your poems' capture of the first round. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 9:44 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Kristen. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 1:16 PM
The last two lines add mystery. Enjoyed. Congrats on this selection. Dave
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January 9, 2011 at 6:28 PM
Congrats Kristen on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all today with luv..
Thomer Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 5:46 PM
congrats on being featured. this was a most interesting poem to read. i felt it. well written. --Madison
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January 9, 2011 at 2:49 PM
yes the feeling makes us feel young and in love:), enjoyed your sweet write,..p.d.
Mehta Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 12:37 PM
Nice jouci and sensual write for the contest, Good luck, kristen
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