Butterflies

Flying, 
Beautiful, 
Terrifying creatures. 

As a young girl, 
I went to a butterfly museum
on a school field trip. 

I'll never forget that day
these colorful, fragile 
little things with wings
were flying in the open
air as I entered the spacious
place. 

Cages were forbidden
They were free
They could rest
and perch anywhere they pleased.
They didn't have a care in
the world. 

A few of them landed on my
shoulder, my chest, and my
arms, and I panicked. 

My cousin was there and
she laughed and pointed
as I flailed and screamed
doing anything to get these
terrifying little beauties 
off of me. 

It worked. 
Frightened, they fluttered away
only to land on someone else
and, me, I dodged every other
one of those monsters that
came my way. 

After it all ended, and we were
loading back on the school bus,
I was relieved that those harmless
little beasts weren't anywhere near
me anymore. 

Those Flying
Terrifyingly
Beautiful 
Creatures.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 4:09 PM
Bad experience for a child ....Sometimes for some children those butterflies or any bug that is really harmless can be very scary..Thanks for the help on the Sonnet ...I will call it Poetic License..I chose to write it that way..Keep your creative pen flowing..Sara
Spence Sr Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 2:24 PM
I like this descriptive poem of your adventure with the butterflies. It flows very well and is quite imaginative. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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