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Butterflies

I have butterflies in my stomach Cut me open, let them out Stitch me up, push me down Fly away black winged beauty Turn around, shoot me

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/17/2010 7:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Destiny. Love, Carol

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/14/2010 10:45:00 PM

To be featured in the Soupland for a week is an honor. Congratulations and God bless. Ernilando

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/14/2010 5:55:00 PM

Congrats Destiny on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. an excellent choice to feature...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Skat A

Date: 2/18/2010 7:43:00 PM

THAT IS WHAT I CALL A FUNNY MEAN POEM. SO NEGATIVE, DO NOT WORRY I LOVE NEGATIVE.....SHORT AND DEADLY....OR BEAUTY AND A STING ..LOVE YOUR POEM..I.T.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/22/2010 7:34:00 PM

Visual galore in this one Destiny... enjoyed as I luv butterflies also... both kinds ... the creatures and the ones I still get in my tummy when I get nervous or things get chaotic... good job of expression and vivid lines.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Jay Loveless

Date: 1/22/2010 10:42:00 AM

I love this. would you mind if i maybe used some of this is a song im trying to work on? if not its okay, but i think this is really great. xo Rain

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 1/20/2010 7:32:00 AM

I found this poem very enjoyable to read. I can definitely relate to this one. Excellent write! Welcome to the Soup! Rock on with the words, dude.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/14/2010 3:33:00 PM

I agree with Joanna..GREAT poem but the last line is confusing. You have talent .BG

Joanna Smith

Date: 1/14/2010 7:51:00 AM

i like this one =) but i dont understand the last line i hope you can leave me an explaination somtime in my soupmail. and thanks for the comment on my poem :D