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perch for yellow butterflies
hungry mantis meal

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Susan Ashley

September 2, 2024 at 6:03 PM

Dear Warren, your butterfly haiku is full of drama and tragic beauty. But what is Nature if not a balance of life and death? Splendid poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Warren Doll

September 7, 2024 at 6:40 AM

Susan, great to hear from you. Thanks for all of your positive comments. All the best~ Warren

Karen Jones

August 21, 2024 at 8:08 AM

Wow I love butterflies and this haiku has gentle beauty as well as tragic looming! Wonderful haiku!

Warren Doll

September 7, 2024 at 6:38 AM

So glad that you liked it, . Thanks for your visit~ Warren

Gary Radice

August 7, 2024 at 5:27 AM

I guess Praying Mantises have to eat too but those yellow butterflies are a beautiful sight to behold. Your words just drip with the feeling of mother nature Warren. Cheers - Gary

Warren Doll

August 9, 2024 at 4:54 AM

Gary thanks for your positive comments and visit-Warren

Mike Gentile

July 26, 2024 at 4:53 AM

Warren, your gift is the ability to create such lovely haiku! I ended love the imagery created therein and this one I think is one of your best!! happy Friday!

Warren Doll

July 30, 2024 at 11:59 AM

Mike, great to hear from you. Thanks so much for your positive comments and visit-Warren

Paula Goldsmith

July 12, 2024 at 12:36 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "butterflies" Haiku write. I love pretty butterflies... Few words with much said. I wish you would write more. Have a great day writing away..................

Warren Doll

July 17, 2024 at 8:17 AM

Paula, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for your positive comments I love butterflies too. I have a butterfly bush in my backyard, and it's visited by yellow and black swallowtail butterflies. If I'm lucky, a couple of monarch butterflies. All the best-Warren

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