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Butterflies

Beneath the gray skies, lied a magical fortress Under the galaxy, fluttering species roamed around here and there Tedious work was given to the wicked witch’s elves They all shouted “All Hail the Wicked Queen!” Evergreen were there internal glare Running on mound less lands were unicorns of light Fighting off ogres and dragons were a prince’s and knight’s job Looping through bubbles were delicate babies that cooed their first words International games were held every month Evening gowns were of hues of rainbow Stunning they were yet were awfully full of might

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Date: 5/26/2020 10:23:00 AM
Welcome to PS! Diana, you have potential that is exploding. Keep writing. Very imaginative, yet tied to the title "Butterflies." I may offer this idea if u wish to write for publication: Make the lines shorter. And count the syllables to make it the same in - at least - every odd or even lines. Just for fun, count syllables in Shakespeare's sonnets. ThanX, Dr. Deo
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