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Buttercups

Lots of buttercups Spread onto my lawn Look so much better Than dandelions The colour brightens All the grass Making it better With the colour spread.

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Date: 11/1/2024 11:11:00 AM
Just a lovely first poem on Poetry Soup. Have a buttercup kind of day, sweet Darlene!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/1/2024 12:06:00 PM
Hello Kim Rodrigues, Tjhank you, i will. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 3/29/2024 8:01:00 AM
Darlene, I see you've been on PS for a while. This is really cute, The comparison to dandelions makes me smile. Sounds like you have a lawn that you leave to its own devices. Some of us go crazy trying to get the weeds out, but we are fighting a losing battle.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/30/2024 12:40:00 PM
Hello Duke, yes I have been on P.S. for awhile. Some people like the dandelions. these people make wine from this weed. Also put into their salads. Yes some of us go crazy over these weeds. enjoy your day my friend. Darlene/
Date: 3/19/2018 4:53:00 AM
like Scott's comment below, thought i'd see your first posting.yes love it,
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/8/2018 11:55:00 AM
Hello Harry this is my all time favourite poem. I am very proud of this poem. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 2/4/2018 6:14:00 AM
Thought I'd see where it all began. Nice promising start.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/4/2018 10:58:00 AM
Hello Scott,thank you for your comment. i do like butter cups.Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 8/31/2017 6:45:00 AM
Lovely image of Spring. why do you class this as in ABC form, please? God Bless. D.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/31/2017 8:12:00 AM
Hello Dave, Now that I read my poem over again, I have no idea why I listed it ABC it should have been Free verse God Bless Dave. Have a nice day my friend. Thank you for pointing out my blooper.
Date: 2/20/2017 3:28:00 PM
Sweet
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/25/2017 1:32:00 PM
Hello Donna Thank you Donna.This is the very first poem I wrote.
Date: 10/24/2016 2:29:00 PM
Spread. Butter. I saw what you did there, funny! Thank you for this little drop of sunshine
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/25/2016 10:46:00 AM
Eric yes spread butter Glad I was able to give you a drop of sunshine.
Date: 9/7/2016 8:56:00 AM
I like the humorous sarcasm in your piece... Congrats Darlene, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/20/2016 5:02:00 PM
Thank you Teddy I enjoyed writing this poem.This was my first win. I feel proud. I look forword to reading your poetry.
Date: 9/2/2016 8:18:00 PM
Darlene, very cute poem lovely lady :) Welcome to the Soup, may you have a wonderful experience like I am having...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/20/2016 5:04:00 PM
Hello Laura I feel so proud of this poem.It was my first win.I look forword to reading your poetry.
Date: 7/27/2016 10:07:00 PM
back here again, Darlene, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/3/2016 2:52:00 PM
I could use some advice from you If you see something is not right.
Date: 7/25/2016 3:21:00 PM
Darlen,,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/3/2016 2:36:00 PM
I would like also to be your new poetry friend Hello I enjoy poetry It comes to me naturally I enjoy creating my poems I've done it for a year, and I want to continue writing.
Date: 7/25/2016 2:01:00 PM
Darlen, this is a beautiful abc form.... Linda
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/3/2016 2:40:00 PM
I am pleased that You like my poem
Date: 7/25/2016 1:44:00 PM
This form is more free verse not ABC...there is a form tab on the top of the page SO next time you can check....I'd invest in weed be gone to get rid of the pesky infiltration
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/3/2016 2:48:00 PM
Thank you for your comment I did not realize that it was a free verse . Thank you for telling me What type of oetry do you write?

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