Butter Side Up

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In life… Whether you remain as plain toast, Or into a soldier you are cut, Whether you are covered in marmalade, Or dipped into yolk from an egg cup, In life there’s one main rule, should you fall… Stay butter side up!

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/11/2021 3:47:00 PM

Hello Bill I read this several times and i like it. It will be my fav. enjoy your evening my poet friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/12/2021 7:41:00 AM

Hello Bill, I read the poem again. It is cute. enjoy your day my poet friend. Darlene

Clive Blake
Date: 12/11/2021 11:49:00 PM

Hi Darlene, this is definitely one of my more quirkier writes, so I am pleased you like it. Thanks for the comment and I hope you have a great weekend also ~ Clive :)