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Butt Man

A boob man I could be. Yours do titillate me, so jiggly and bouncy. The two of them and me, a love triangle we. But your butt's what sends me skyward. My ecstasy comes when I get to see that vertical cleft be creased horizontally. Those two mounds' little 'v' that sits like a cherry on a Sundae ought be against some law. A 'Pee- ping Tom' it entraps me. Odd parts entice. Dimply knees charm, and those curvy flanks get me all squeezie. But you bent overly; Wow! That's pure poetry. *2nd place in F Hererra's contest 'Erotica' 11/30/11.

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Date: 11/5/2011 10:49:00 PM
;-) CONGRATULATIONS, ON YOUR WIN~ Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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Date: 11/3/2011 3:36:00 AM
Congratulations on the win with this lovely write, John
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Date: 11/2/2011 10:41:00 PM
way to go. This fun one won!! The ending is pure genius!
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Date: 11/2/2011 5:40:00 PM
As Nancy says dig ya daddio, cut to the chase above below, us little animals need the fix, of boobs n tubes n bellatrix? sidetracked by the thoughts , affixed...
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John Smith
Date: 11/2/2011 6:42:00 PM
Delightful thoughts
Date: 11/2/2011 4:40:00 PM
i've just self-censored everything was gonna say... so will just say WAY GLAD this po place this way! Digya, John Smith~Nancy Jones
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John Smith
Date: 11/2/2011 6:41:00 PM
Hey, don't censor; soup mail.
Date: 11/2/2011 10:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "Erotica" contest John. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2011 10:08:00 AM
super congrats John on another big win luv..
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Date: 10/1/2011 11:25:00 PM
It was as much fun reading the comments as the poem John, you sure incite a lot of interest in these things you write. Let's never put a damper on your wicked mind. haha
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Date: 9/27/2011 11:30:00 PM
I'm a butt man myself. I find this poem humorous. I truly enjoyed it. If you had a poem called boob dude i wonder what that would say
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John Smith
Date: 9/28/2011 12:57:00 AM
There was a lewd, crude boob dude who'd chewed too hard on her nude... You'll have to finish this. I'm spinning out of control.
Date: 9/18/2011 9:14:00 AM
LOL, love this witty piece
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Date: 9/18/2011 1:33:00 AM
wow...love this one..i will have to share this one with the hubby i'm sure he will enjoy this...lol....smiles...chiquita
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Date: 9/16/2011 6:33:00 PM
shake your groove thang then... lol!~n
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Date: 9/15/2011 10:51:00 PM
hahaha. YOu and Frank are both butt guys! YOu could enter this possibly in the unmentionable contest? heehee. Nice to see you got a new one posted! It was great fun to read.
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Date: 9/15/2011 4:43:00 PM
Racy work..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, rural has its benefits as does the city..To each person there are choices..Sometimes it is do I get a job and earn a living or not...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 9/15/2011 9:30:00 AM
Oh Joh, A captivating look into the mind of a pure romantic. Now I'm getting to know you better you naught boy! Love this triangle of curves.
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Date: 9/15/2011 7:50:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today John. Let the words continue to flow from your pen. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/14/2011 8:58:00 PM
finally poetry my husband loves, lol! he is a butt man too :P
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John Smith
Date: 9/15/2011 4:34:00 AM
I'm so glad there are two of us.
Date: 9/14/2011 6:46:00 PM
the passion for the lovely pit, the breasts from heaven calmy sit, the combination makes me sweat a bit, but then i'm being childish ...it tit tit:)
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Date: 9/14/2011 4:44:00 PM
John this is cleverly crafted and delightfully funny expressing the truth of feelings luv.. my hubby is not an A man but he does luv those top mounds much..haha.. great read..luv..
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