John Smith Poet Monorhyme

Butt Man

A boob man I could be.
Yours do titillate me,  
so jiggly and bouncy. 
The two of them and me,
a love triangle we.

But your butt's what sends me 
skyward.  My ecstasy 
comes when I get to see 
that vertical cleft be 
creased horizontally.  

Those two mounds' little 'v' 
that sits like a cherry 
on a Sundae ought be 
against some law.  A 'Pee- 
ping Tom' it entraps me. 
 
Odd parts entice.  Dimply 
knees charm, and those curvy 
flanks get me all squeezie. 
But you bent overly; 
Wow! That's pure poetry. 


*2nd place in F Hererra's contest 'Erotica' 11/30/11.

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Poet Destroyer A November 5, 2011 at 10:49 PM ;-) CONGRATULATIONS, ON YOUR WIN~ Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta November 3, 2011 at 3:36 AM Congratulations on the win with this lovely write, John

Andrea Dietrich November 2, 2011 at 10:41 PM way to go. This fun one won!! The ending is pure genius!

Don Johnson November 2, 2011 at 5:40 PM As Nancy says dig ya daddio, cut to the chase above below, us little animals need the fix, of boobs n tubes n bellatrix? sidetracked by the thoughts , affixed... John Smith November 2, 2011 at 6:42 PM Delightful thoughts

Nancy Jones November 2, 2011 at 4:40 PM i've just self-censored everything was gonna say... so will just say WAY GLAD this po place this way! Digya, John Smith~Nancy Jones John Smith November 2, 2011 at 6:41 PM Hey, don't censor; soup mail.

Carol Sunshine Brown November 2, 2011 at 10:24 AM Congratulations on your win in Frank's "Erotica" contest John. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 2, 2011 at 10:08 AM super congrats John on another big win luv..

Elizabeth Wesley October 1, 2011 at 11:25 PM It was as much fun reading the comments as the poem John, you sure incite a lot of interest in these things you write. Let's never put a damper on your wicked mind. haha

Honestly J.T. September 27, 2011 at 11:30 PM I'm a butt man myself. I find this poem humorous. I truly enjoyed it. If you had a poem called boob dude i wonder what that would say John Smith September 28, 2011 at 12:57 AM There was a lewd, crude boob dude who'd chewed too hard on her nude... You'll have to finish this. I'm spinning out of control.

Jack Horne September 18, 2011 at 9:14 AM LOL, love this witty piece

Chiquitachiamaka Baity September 18, 2011 at 1:33 AM wow...love this one..i will have to share this one with the hubby i'm sure he will enjoy this...lol....smiles...chiquita

Nancy Jones September 16, 2011 at 6:33 PM shake your groove thang then... lol!~n

Andrea Dietrich September 15, 2011 at 10:51 PM hahaha. YOu and Frank are both butt guys! YOu could enter this possibly in the unmentionable contest? heehee. Nice to see you got a new one posted! It was great fun to read.

Sara Kendrick September 15, 2011 at 4:43 PM Racy work..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, rural has its benefits as does the city..To each person there are choices..Sometimes it is do I get a job and earn a living or not...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Elizabeth Wesley September 15, 2011 at 9:30 AM Oh Joh, A captivating look into the mind of a pure romantic. Now I'm getting to know you better you naught boy! Love this triangle of curves.

Carol Sunshine Brown September 15, 2011 at 7:50 AM Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today John. Let the words continue to flow from your pen. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan September 14, 2011 at 8:58 PM finally poetry my husband loves, lol! he is a butt man too :P John Smith September 15, 2011 at 4:34 AM I'm so glad there are two of us.

Don Johnson September 14, 2011 at 6:46 PM the passion for the lovely pit, the breasts from heaven calmy sit, the combination makes me sweat a bit, but then i'm being childish ...it tit tit:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 14, 2011 at 4:44 PM John this is cleverly crafted and delightfully funny expressing the truth of feelings luv.. my hubby is not an A man but he does luv those top mounds much..haha.. great read..luv..