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Never in secluded pools they dwell, I speak of ornate waterfalls, they rise and fall majestically, near docks, wharves and piers, sparkle, gleam, smooth flow trickle, eye balm whirl fantastic perk on tap, stickybeak on podium rapids, instigator signage when our trek seems dull, but reflection is a gem warp cataract, kinetic rebound ocean wave backbeat, which in fact an upfront blissful target, hardly ever missing opal bulls-eye, environmental bubbles that somehow never burst, indulge outlandish fare Promethean, spurt on vermillion lanyards pendant sweep, dream paint sunrise clementine tincture, daub acrylic spree through pale moon orb, squeeze tube lambent hue past frail mandala, eternal sepia a light touch pristine shroud, that loiters over urban life force ripple, flaunt your image rich abundant fire

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Date: 2/4/2024 11:32:00 AM
I enjoy the style of this poem. You have achieved what I always a for in writing, that is, punch and definition. Poem has strength and connection between the lines. I'll fave.
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Date: 2/4/2024 12:39:00 AM
Brilliant write this is, you havr a way with painting imagery in such a detailed and artistic manner .i loved the flow of this especially the opening lines truly drew me in. And the picture youve used here too fits the poem so perfectly. I especially love “ I speak of ornate waterfalls, they rise and fall majestically, near docks, wharves and piers, sparkle, gleam,,“ magical and enchanting! And your subtle use of alliterations too is seamless. Brilliant use of colors. Pleasure reading your work
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