Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Rhyme

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- But Never My Heart -

Dear God support me to the end

                                  insatiable foe never a friend

                                     Forgive me for my sins,

                                   an expression of my violins

                                        I chose a rocky road

                                   inappropriate on a postcard

                                  Scared and so full of sorrow

                               but always a hope for tomorrow

                                      Save me from my need

                                           control my deeds

                                                    Amen






                                                22/12/2020
                                    Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Cecilia Macfarlane January 14, 2021 at 7:26 AM A prayer that conveys so much. Well written Anne-Lise. Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2021 at 8:11 AM Thank you very much, Cecilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu January 4, 2021 at 7:39 AM Hello Sunshine Smile I will write this poem out and frame it to. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu January 6, 2021 at 3:01 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, Your welcome my friend. Hugs Darlene. Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:32 AM - Thank you very much, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos January 4, 2021 at 3:25 AM I Will give this poem to a calligrapher to write and frame it for next to my bedside - I love it my dear friend and poetry sis. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:32 AM Thank you very much, Sis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anitha Jayasankar January 2, 2021 at 2:05 AM This is such a lovely prayer Anne... straight from the heart... Happy New Year dear friend.. Hugs ~ Ani Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:32 AM - Thank you very much, Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison January 1, 2021 at 12:35 PM a beautiful prayer Anne-lise happy new year:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:31 AM - Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Cohen December 30, 2020 at 2:05 PM Beautiful and stirring. Loved "expression of my violins." Best to you in the new year. Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:31 AM Thank you very much, Eric :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France December 29, 2020 at 10:58 AM Anne-Lise, you penned a beautiful prayer, a FAV for me _Constance Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:31 AM - Thank you very much, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith December 29, 2020 at 9:58 AM "Beautiful" I love your line, "Dear God support me to the end." God, please do. "Happy New Year" Today, have joy/blessings with a hug.................. Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:30 AM - Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman December 27, 2020 at 10:39 PM Powerful poem, Anne-Lise, All the best for 2021...Harry Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:30 AM - Thank you very much, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell December 23, 2020 at 6:58 PM A lovely prayer Anne-Lise, one that needs be left to speak for itself. Have a blessed Christmas and every blessing for the new year, hugs and blessings,Gordon Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:30 AM - Thank you very much, Gordon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh December 23, 2020 at 3:55 PM Wonderful thoughts dear lady. God bless you always and M E R R Y Christmas Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:29 AM - Thank you very much, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera December 23, 2020 at 11:35 AM A great prayer, Anne-Lise!! Wish you Happy Christmas and holidays!! Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:29 AM - Thank you very much, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paghunda Zahid December 23, 2020 at 11:16 AM Amen... May His be with you always. Great write sunshine Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:29 AM - Thank you very much, Paghunda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar December 23, 2020 at 6:40 AM A very appropriate prayer. Wishing you a happy and holy Christmas. ~~ Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:28 AM - Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May December 23, 2020 at 5:26 AM You depict the scene well with this prayer Anne, Merry Christmas! Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:28 AM - Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit December 23, 2020 at 5:16 AM You said it so well--just what she is thinking. All the best, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:27 AM Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis December 23, 2020 at 4:24 AM An inspiring prayer that uplifts the soul dearest, Anne-Lise. Merry Christmas to you and your family! Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:27 AM Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham December 23, 2020 at 1:23 AM A prayer of a lonely soul hoping to change her life. Good luck Anne and hope you have a lovely Christmas and a happy new year. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:27 AM - Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley December 22, 2020 at 8:03 PM Always hope, always blessed promises kept. Have faith- ask and ye shall receive- in accords with God's plan my friend. Great poem.. A fav.. Merry Christmas.. Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:26 AM - Thank you very much, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy December 22, 2020 at 1:28 PM Amen, wonderful poem too! Best regards and smiles Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2021 at 11:26 AM - Thank you very much, Abdullah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)