But If You Try Sometimes

But if you try sometimes...

“I saw her today at the reception”

My eyes filled with changing emotions
In satin gown and fire brand hair
A china doll beyond the display case
Happiness was breathing the air 

“In her glass was a bleeding man”

A shadow of someone on the platform
I could see his face wracked in pain
Scars of here and prior altercations
Acid falling in the guise of rain 

“She was practiced at the art of deception”

Behind that sequined mask she stood hiding
A smile painted in pastel red
Pretending a friendship is more than just golden
Wishing the other were endlessly dead

“Well I could tell by her blood-stained hands”

Pointing fingers dripping in excess waste
Smearing the drapes of lipstick poetry
Planting a seed of doubt deep within
Smirking as she said these words to me

“You can’t always get what you want”

Written with the help of the Rolling Stones classic - "You can't always get what you want" The italicized lines are lyrics from the song.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marie Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 6:35 AM
Marvelous story Chris :-) So wonderfully crafted with classic lyrics that ring oh so true. A remarkable piece, so very well done. blessings, lynn
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March 27, 2017 at 8:12 AM
Thank you so very much Lynn. I am glad you liked my collaboration with the Stones.
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March 24, 2017 at 11:27 AM
This is great Chris, love the way you have incorporated the song lyrics into your masterpiece. A 7
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March 24, 2017 at 1:22 PM
Thank you Elizabeth, so very much. I am glad you liked this. I have written a few poems using song lyrics as my inspiration.
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March 24, 2017 at 10:15 AM
Superb narration my friend, Chis. A seven.
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March 24, 2017 at 10:34 AM
Thanks so very much Demetrios
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March 24, 2017 at 9:09 AM
This is one of the best I have read today! Excellent story telling!
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March 24, 2017 at 10:34 AM
Thanks so much Richard. I appreciate that.
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