Ankit Vaidya Poet Light Verse

But I Had It

i'm still rising,but i had it
i was running,flashing few thing
you couldn't keep up,you were falling
slowly...

catching it up,keeping up too
its was flying,but i had to
you did't even notice,and how could you
have it...

dreaming of it,imagine i had it
keeping it high,setting me free
you are watching,feeled with anger

but how did,you get it
i was ahead, but i missed it
how could i, even dream if 

falling slowly and you have it
though i was first, i did't notice
i'm still rising,but i had it

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Beata Agustin November 9, 2024 at 9:57 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A May 26, 2016 at 10:37 PM You have a certain way with poetry... Enjoyed. Pd Ankit Vaidya May 27, 2016 at 5:16 AM thank you alot

Skat A May 26, 2016 at 6:12 PM sad you had it, and it slipped away, Good poem, Ankit. skat Ankit Vaidya May 27, 2016 at 5:16 AM thank you skat