But Hope,

but hope
is merely my constellation
of your stars
breathe
light and breathe
freedom
and breathe music 
into me
deep into me
and then into this exposed 
yet tamed wilderness
also me
hopeful me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Fleming Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Beautiful? Yes - undoubtedly! But more than that...cannot quite put my finger on it. Something indefinable...something indescribable...something that is more than the sum total of its parts. Something else yes...but what that something is I just do not know. We are agreed then. Let us just call it - Beautiful!! Your work is a joy to read poetess...truly it is. :) john
Reeves Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 9:48 AM
Thanks!
One Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 5:28 AM
Great poem Chante..
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January 9, 2018 at 8:55 AM
Thank You!
Michael Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 4:50 AM
Breathe life into me... A lovely little poem...All the best Chante
Reeves Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 8:56 AM
Thank You!
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