But a Whisper

As I held your
Limp lifeless form
The blank stare from 
Your once all seeing eyes
I felt the warmth leave
And a bitter cold
Creep over your shell
Of a figure your moans
Seemingly the only sign
Of life stabbing my heart
I am not God! But my poor
Soul whom I love so dear
I can not bare the suffering
If I could but whisper in your ear
And breathe life into your core
I would change places with you
But I fear the worms are calling
From their damp dark soil
And your soul will be ferried somewhere
But your shell will remain to toil
I hold you close one last time 
As is meant to be not my choice
I feel so empty
Suffer no more love 
Our parting will be short lived
A part of me will go with you
It is all I have to give
I am not God! But if I could
But whisper and breathe life
Back into you I would hold 
You forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bohack Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 4:28 PM
But A Whisper...wonderfully poetic, nice blessings Amy
Gelok Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 4:26 PM
I am always amazed how e can put on paper our most intimate feeling for the love we have just lost, be it wife, husband, child, parent or lover. I felt your sorrow. Thankyou for sharing.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 11:37 PM
Achingly beautiful and bittersweet... '...if I could but...breathe life into you core,' '...a part of me will go with you,' simply true and heartfelt. You really know how to tug on the heartstrings! Well done Kelli!! Best wishes, Keith
White Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 2:42 AM
It is true unadulterated feelings that I write with and ingredient you cannot fake. Thank you Keith. Love Kelli
Ferguson Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 6:01 AM
that made me cry,
White Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 6:21 AM
so tender is the gift of life but even more so when it is taken away
Hunjeri Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 5:28 PM
Very touching. Am sorry about the loss of your pet. Welcome to soup.
White Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 10:10 PM
Ty very much.
Gifford Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 7:55 AM
Hi, Kelli, I am so sorry for the loss of your pet. Are you new here? I only see 5 poems. Welcome to the Soup. And call on any of us if you have questions. We're here for each other. Thanks for reading one of my poems. ~~~Darlene
White Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 10:11 PM
Ty very much. Yes I am new to this forum.
Allison Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 2:09 PM
oh it is simply heartbreaking when you lose a pet - this is very tender and beautifully written:-) Hugs Jan xx7
White Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 2:12 PM
I felt so helpless. Ty
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