Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Haiku

Busy Blue Jay

smart blue jay whines sharp
busy proudly building nest...
hidden acorns sprout

May 11, 2020
Syllable count : 5/7/5
Checked on howmanysyllables.com
Contest : Haiku-Blue Jay
Sponsor : Tania Kitchin

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 15, 2020 at 11:23 AM So creative! Wonderful haiku. Congratulations or your win Subimal! xomo

MD Johnson May 15, 2020 at 6:48 AM Congratulations! And yes, we have these wonderful creatures to thank for their contribution in maintaining our Oak forests. Regards —MDJ

Jan Allison May 14, 2020 at 5:39 PM wonderful imagery and I love the juxtaposition line Subimal, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin May 14, 2020 at 3:56 PM Subimal, congratulations on your first place win in the contest with your lovely haiku, I love the last line!

David Drowley May 14, 2020 at 12:28 PM 'Subimal, Congratulations on your win. Keep up your excellent writes. David'

John Watt May 14, 2020 at 12:20 PM Congrats on your top placement, Subimal ~ John

Aditi Mishra May 14, 2020 at 11:57 AM You gave it an interesting touch with the last line. Congratulations on your well-deserved win :)

Michelle Faulkner May 11, 2020 at 11:03 AM This is cleverly done, especially the last line about acorn sprouts - wonderful entry for the contest!