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Busy Blue Jay

smart blue jay whines sharp busy proudly building nest... hidden acorns sprout May 11, 2020 Syllable count : 5/7/5 Checked on howmanysyllables.com Contest : Haiku-Blue Jay Sponsor : Tania Kitchin

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/15/2020 11:23:00 AM

So creative! Wonderful haiku. Congratulations or your win Subimal! xomo

Md Johnson

Date: 5/15/2020 6:48:00 AM

Congratulations! And yes, we have these wonderful creatures to thank for their contribution in maintaining our Oak forests. Regards —MDJ

Jan Allison

Date: 5/14/2020 5:39:00 PM

wonderful imagery and I love the juxtaposition line Subimal, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/14/2020 3:56:00 PM

Subimal, congratulations on your first place win in the contest with your lovely haiku, I love the last line!

David Drowley

Date: 5/14/2020 12:28:00 PM

'Subimal, Congratulations on your win. Keep up your excellent writes. David'

John Watt

Date: 5/14/2020 12:20:00 PM

Congrats on your top placement, Subimal ~ John

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/14/2020 11:57:00 AM

You gave it an interesting touch with the last line. Congratulations on your well-deserved win :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/11/2020 11:03:00 AM

This is cleverly done, especially the last line about acorn sprouts - wonderful entry for the contest!