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8th place in Your Favourite # 3 Poetry Contest sponsored by: Seth Pina 

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BUSTED

A mouse in our house did confound,
Who crept about without a sound,
He ate all our cheese,
And custard with ease,
Leaving nothing for us to be found.

His roaming through alleys in town,
He’d become very well known around,
His tail quite bent,
His poor ears where rent,
The cat had chased out the hound.

He came to our door very thin,
He was happy to sit there within,
He was no clown,
Around the town,
He sat quietly planning where to begin.

When we had gone off to sleep,
He was ready to earn his keep,
There would be no fair match,
If the mouse he did catch,
While the house lay in silence so deep.

There once was a cat known as Busted,
Whose hunting was sharp and well trusted,
With a flick of his tail,
He was on the trail,
He ensured that mouse had been busted.
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Volumes Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 8:29 AM
Loved your story Alison. The rhyming and rhythm added an enchanting lilt to your narrative. Most entertaining.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 3:35 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment.
Gauthier Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 6:18 PM
Came back to listen to the audio ~ totally charming and delightful !
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 11:38 PM
Busted now gets the custard
Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 4:34 AM
Delightfully charming ~ the flow is musical ~ well done
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 4:40 AM
Thank you
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