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Burying the Hatchet

Nobody ever forgets where he buried the hatchet. ~ Kin Hubbard Riley was a control freak barking orders at his wife who'd scurry like a timid mouse knowing if she didn't conform a barrage of blows would rain down on her body Of course, he made certain not to mar her pretty face - he needed her to look good when she collected his beer from the local store leaving home at the same time every day she was always back within the hour But...unbeknownst to Riley his wife Lou had caught the eye of Sid the store keeper they would steal passionate kisses on his coffee break which coincided with her visits Sid knew her life was unbearable and secretly he hired a hit man to do the deed when Lou was out shopping Riley was felled with one blow…. Nobody ever forgets where the hitman buried the hatchet! Quotable Poetry Contest Sponsored by Regina McIntosh 10/18/20
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Proxenos Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 8:36 AM
Great plot you wove into poetic justice. The husband had it coming. Good luck in the contest my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 4:21 PM
Nothing like a happily ever after justifiable homicidal ending!
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 4:30 PM
love that comment:-) hugs jan xx
Laurie Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 4:32 PM
G’day Jan … apart from being an intriguing verse, the plot is worthy of a play - thank you Jan - Lindsay
Allison Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 4:34 PM
thanks Lindsay i have gone over to the dark side for a change lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 4:03 PM
Congratulations, Jan. Wow! What a story of power and control! You have done an amazing job, Jan. Hugs, Mala
Allison Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 4:06 PM
thanks so much :-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 7:11 AM
Another hatchet winner! Well done and congratulations for writing a winner, Jan.
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 7:49 AM
Thanks Jenna I have an even darker one for today:-( hugs jan xx
Watt Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 11:49 PM
Proving yet again you are a poetess of great versatility, and occasional dark shadows. Love it!
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 7:49 AM
I have gone even darker with my poem today... a very emotive subject on the death penalty, will have to get my funny hat on for tomorrow:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 7:11 PM
The wicked need to watch their backs...all the time!
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 7:48 AM
thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 1:37 PM
you've done an amazing job of working that expression into your poem, jan! bravo to you!
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 1:40 PM
Thanks Ilene, its a little dark for me but i had to get that punch line in, in fact it was my starting point for the poem:-) hugs jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 12:41 PM
I try to look at the bright side, e.g., like Trump will be reincarnated as an African-American woman in Mississippi ......... Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 1:01 PM
lol, only time will tell Rico!:-) hugs jan xx
Kauffman Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 9:58 AM
A story of power and control as old as mankind but told with a fresh approach, Jan. Like Pixie I missed your hilarious sense of humor. Next time! Congratulations.
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 10:31 AM
I will try and write a fun poem next... the contest was closing and there were only 2 spaces left so I had to rush to get this written and posted, am SO delighted to be on the winner's list:-) hugs jan xx
Mcintosh Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 4:37 AM
Wonderful writing, Jan. I enjoyed this tremendously. Thank you for entering :) Congrats and God bless you too :)
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 8:56 AM
I am stunned and delighted to be on the winners list, i wasn't sure the dark subject of abuse would be acceptable to you, thank you so much:-) hugs jan xx
Buhagiar Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 11:30 PM
Can't agree with murder, but on the other hand he deserved it. I hate such bullies. ~~
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 8:55 AM
Thanks Victor, it is a deep dark poem for me:-( hugs jan xx
Rose  Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 6:33 PM
EEK! Jan, this is pretty creepy, wheres the funnies / I miss them
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 8:51 AM
I will try to write a fun poem next Pixie:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 3:11 PM
Good one Jan, when a man does that he already had the plans of committing the crime of wife beating. Good luck in the contest. hugs eve
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 8:51 AM
thanks Eve, I never know what will come into my brain but i couldnt resist the final line burying the hatchet :-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 2:58 PM
Ohhh you committed poetic murder!! haha There is a dark side to Jan Allison. Loved it, Jan.
Allison Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 3:00 PM
lol Jenna, I never know what my muse will come up with next but knowing the 'proper' meaning of the phrase I couldnt resist the punch line:-) hugs jan xx
Y. Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 2:39 PM
WoW! Jan, You penned this well . It was like was watching a movie or reading a good book. Men that physically or mentally abuse their wives are cowards. This goes for any abuser. Whether male or female. Write’s of abuse hits home with me. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day my friend-Alexis
Allison Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 2:42 PM
thanks Alexis , i doubt it will place in the contest but I couldn't resist the word play with burying the hatchet:-) hugs jan xx
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