Bury Me Not So Soon

“I am the master of my fate” O Time, breathe softly And caress my wounds By your wings vagrant And let the sun rays Enfold me in their vault While singing their song Of eternal peace As I bemoan the battle lost. Bury me not so soon, My companion for life, A man rich in glory vain Striving for triumphalism Through battles galore, Will, how could he, To breathe his last Until his veins have shed That last straw of the rebel Burning in his heart.
"I am the master of my fate" - William Ernest Henley
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Lindley Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 3:33 PM
Love this great poem.. Congratulations on your win. God bless..
Rastogi Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 5:32 AM
Thanks, Robert, for your very kind words. Pramod
Koplin Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 2:16 PM
Nicely penned. Congratulations
Rastogi Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 5:33 AM
Thanks, Mark. Pramod
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 1:57 PM
Very beautiful and poignant Pramod. Congratulations on your wonderful first placement! : )
Rastogi Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 5:36 AM
Connie, I feel touched and inspired by your comments. Pramod
Andresen Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 12:10 PM
- An inspiring poetic work, Pramod - Congratulations on your win :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Rastogi Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 5:37 AM
Anne-Lise, you are such a kind person. Thanks, Pramod
Adams Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 11:35 AM
great write... congratulations on your first place win :) hugs
Rastogi Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 5:40 AM
Thanks a lot, Sandra, so kind of you, Pramod
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February 9, 2020 at 9:36 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved top placement for this wonderful poem! Well done! Pandita
Rastogi Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 5:56 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words, Pandita, they inspire me. Pramod
One Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 6:06 AM
there is always one battle that we will always lose.. i like your take on the contest and the use of language.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Rastogi Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 6:00 AM
Thank you, again for your excellent choice of themes, so beautiful that it's easy to get lost in them. Pramod
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