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Burnt Wings Falling

Angelic and young , I was mesmerized By the glitter of fame, of endless applause-- For a world became my audience, enticed As heaven’s stars curtsied to my glory. This power drugged me with blind illusion; Ignoring right choices that barbed a life-- A free-fall through sins without a vision Where an altar of egoism ruled. Though I tried to grapple with such fake thrill; How corrupt my pride, each dose addictive That burnt wings plunged into vices , downhill My inner child howling...lost in a maze. For my sweetest desires have gone astray... O , AGONY! Yet, arms reaching for hope Brought me near, nearer to Light’s healed way, To slowly find and embrace my true self. 8/21/2017 Laura Loo’s Fallen Angels Contest

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Date: 9/3/2017 7:15:00 AM
A positive ending to a potentially tragic life. Strong write.
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Date: 8/29/2017 4:42:00 AM
I can almost feel the texture of the emotions in your write... Congrats Nette, for your WIN with this lovely piece! ;-)
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Date: 8/27/2017 5:57:00 AM
Lovely write, Nette - and such a great title, too!! Congratulations on your win! Regards, John.
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Date: 8/25/2017 3:51:00 PM
Wonderful descriptions, Nette, and a gorgeous write! Congrats on your win, my friend! :-)
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Date: 8/25/2017 6:40:00 AM
great poem lovely Nette, truly beautifully expressed, thank you and congrats :)
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Date: 8/22/2017 2:36:00 AM
Simply a very beautiful poem! :) I really liked the last line!
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Date: 8/21/2017 6:11:00 AM
Different take on the theme, Nette, glad it ends well:)
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Date: 8/21/2017 5:16:00 AM
Stirring me to bits; when we get intoxicated with power or fame, vices lurk. Good to know there is light in the darkness before we finally fall.
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Date: 8/21/2017 4:41:00 AM
WOW!! Nette, you are on a roll my friend! You might have told me that but you are certainly on a better roll than I am! And I love what you are doing with this rhyme scheme! That looks like a fun one to try! I certainly enjoyed reading this illustrious piece this morning, you have delighted me with your tremendous poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/21/2017 12:04:00 AM
The name intrigued me and I just had to choose this one to read first, and what a poem. Nette, you are indeed a brilliant poet, you are born to write. Not that you need it but good luck in the contest. I'm going to fave this, and it deserves the highest rating....Maria
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Date: 8/20/2017 5:20:00 PM
What a lovely take on this fallen angel topic, Nette! It is so easy for young people to be dragged into grasp of worldly allure. Luckily your angel managed to find the right path and grow its wings again! Hugs // paul
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Date: 8/20/2017 2:22:00 PM
Modern times suck us into this intoxication for power and fame. Eloquent poetry of a fallen soul saved by an awakening! The finishing touch hit me!
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Date: 8/20/2017 1:07:00 PM
WOW--such poetic arrangement of melodic words! Good luck for the contest, nette!
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Date: 8/20/2017 1:04:00 PM
Nice entry my friend... I agree with Heidi...best of luck nette...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/20/2017 12:44:00 PM
I just love this poem Nette. It is filled with complete honesty and tells such a significant , important story for people to hear! Very inspiring! You are a success here with your beautiful poetry in a sincere way! :) Good luck in the contest!
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