Burnt To a Crisp

burnt to a crisp -
Christmas.
but the town
is famous for
its restoration,
though
pets be gone -
eight in all;
one sits on his lap,
joining
the family’s source
of hope,
lifting the community’s spirits -
touched
by the light of Christ,
afterall 
he’s the source.

the Grinch
became educated —
there was more
than the feast,
than the tree,
than the bulbs.
a calm and gentle manner
upon lost souls.

my hero on earth,
my cousin and kin,
all the right stuff
resides within.

12/28/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 6:41 PM
This I’d gorgeous, full of faith.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 7:36 PM
Thank you!
Romios Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 10:06 AM
What a great one this is. I nominate it for POTD Panagiota
Rodrigues Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 7:36 PM
You are awesome, Panagiota! Hugs!
Foster Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 11:26 AM
christmas town is close to us... a few hours... we drove all the way... and never found the off ramp... there was a fence... we were so sad.... Arizona....YOur poem is lovely, they always are. So much talent. Hugs for your day. Ann
Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 1:52 PM
Thank you, Ann.
Salehi Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 4:03 AM
It's nice to have a hero... Happy Holidays.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 5:59 AM
For his strong heart at a time of great loss. Be blessed, Pashang.
Wolf Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 9:34 PM
To read and reread, and let the message resonate without and within. Touching. Thanks, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 9:49 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon!
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 3:50 PM
It all turned out so well. This is a lovely tribute to the true meaning of Christmas
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 8:07 PM
Surely it is tough but the family is okay and strong.
Adams Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 1:27 PM
to me the beginning seemed sad...but the end result was that hope came through with the spirit of the holiday... enjoyed the read... hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 8:07 PM
Yes, it did, and with the help of friends and strangers.
Ashford Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 12:24 PM
Heart-warming stuff Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 8:08 PM
Yes. thanks, Eric!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 11:42 AM
"all the right stuff resides within" - true!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 8:08 PM
For sure!
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