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Burnt Orange POTD

magenta magic recently escaped eve's skies darkening to plum crows caw on the wing as pink sun turns red-orange day goes up in flames mango berry crush mahogany shadows move gold clocks go tick tock
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Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 7:51 PM
I see now this was also a POTD. Wow. Congrats
Buehler Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 9:26 PM
I appreciate your kind words, Andrea.
M  Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 2:43 AM
Beautiful imagery , beautiful poem! Congratulations Evelyn on POTD! Debx
Buehler Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 8:52 PM
Deepest heartfelt thanks, Deb. :) xx
Rolland Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 7:04 PM
wonderrful, you really are a painter and a poet, so delightful to read and imagine, Thanks evelyn
Buehler Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 9:44 PM
Your gracious compliments are received with great delight. Thank you so much, Yann. :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 9:34 AM
Fantastic imagery, Evelyn. Very well done
Buehler Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 2:16 PM
Your marvelous compliment is appreciated. :)
Empress Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 2:23 PM
Dear evelyn i always admire your use of colors to paint imagery in such an artistic manner. I can see and heart through your picturesque words, woven in sheer eloquence! Its always so hard to pick a fave line in your poems. But do know that i love this haiku chain! Congrats on potd! Well deserved
Buehler Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 10:27 PM
Thank you for the pleasure of reading your lovely remarks and warm congratulations, Ink. Thank have given my day such a lift! Have a blessed weekend, dear friend.
Alex Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 11:10 PM
Very powerful haiku chain. A very beautiful word painting. Congratulations!
Buehler Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 10:19 PM
Thank you for the joy of your comments. Have a wonderful weekend. :)
Toney Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 9:48 PM
Thank you for sharing your dazzling haiku string of pearls with us, Evelyn. Congratulations on being Poem of the Day!
Buehler Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 10:13 PM
I extend delighted thanks for your warm words of congratulations, Mark. Many blessings.
Nicole Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 6:37 PM
Some ' magenta magic, ' with ' a little mango berry crush. ' Such a beautiful image to behold. Your words bring smile, Evelyn. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:55 PM
I am very happy that the words of this poem caused smiles, Brandy. Many thanks for your heartwarming appreciation and congratulations. Blessings and hugs. :)
Mcintosh Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 5:54 PM
Wonderful writing. love this. God bless you and Congrats on POTD. Love, Gina
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:52 PM
Thank you so very much, Gina. God bless you, too.
Allison Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 3:42 PM
what a delightful descriptive string of haiku, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:50 PM
Thank you for the distinct pleasure of your comment. hugs xx :)
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June 20, 2024 at 3:03 PM
Lovely sunset Haiku’s Judy. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:49 PM
I appreciate your warm congratulations very much, Beryl.
May Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 2:02 PM
Congrats on POTD Nicely penned
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:47 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph.
One Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 1:25 PM
Brilliant vivid collection of haiku... Congratulations n POTD also..
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:46 PM
Heartfelt thanks, Silent One.
Hind Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 1:17 PM
Congrats on your POTD! Very unique, and beautiful
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:45 PM
Thank you so much, Paige.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 11:00 AM
Back with Congrats!
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:44 PM
Deepest thanks, Kim. hugs
Slaughter Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 10:50 AM
Unusual and engaging, Evelyn, and congrats on POTD.
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:43 PM
Deepest thanks, my friend. :)
Zottola Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 9:21 AM
I can see the colors! Great imagery!
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:42 PM
Thank you for your thrilling remarks. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:15 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your colorful Haiku writes. Your pen writes with pretty colors. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win......................
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:41 PM
Your lovely congratulatory compliments warm my heart, Paula. Thank you so much. Blessings.
Wolf Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 7:32 AM
'Craws cawing as the day goes up in flames' -- Sounds like an Alfred Hitchcock special there. Are you sure you weren't one of his 'ghost writers,' Evelyn?! ... Congrats on a well-crafted POTD. Many blessings, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:37 PM
Your warm congratulations and blessings are received lots of gratitude, Gershon. Thinking back, I do recall being a ghost writer for Alfred Hitchcock himself. I was just settling into my brilliant career, when at a most inopportune time, I vanished. :0
Gentile Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 5:04 AM
Congratulations Evelyn on your POTD honors! Orange is one of my favorite colors and I thoroughly enjoyed your beautiful sunset imagery as it blazed across my mind! Enjoy your day!
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:26 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, which I loved reading, Daniel. Kindest regards. :)
Rodgers Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 4:38 AM
Dear Evelyn, I think your Haikus are pure magic! Just the metaphorical wording, such as crows cawing against a pink-to-red-orange sky, and the mahogany shadows moving like a mango berry crush—simply exquisite! Congrats on POTD! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:23 PM
Daniel, your heartwarming words are very nice to hear. I can't thank you enough. Blessings.
Seeker Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 4:13 AM
metaphor magic of eventide in this lovely haiku triplet, congratulations on POTD, Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:20 PM
Your delightful words entice smiles. Thank you very much. :)
Kitchin Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 3:31 AM
Evelyn, a beautiful set of haiku's, congratulations on POTD.
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:15 PM
Many thanks, Tania. Best of wishes.
Greenhough Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 3:08 AM
Congratulations on POTD. Your description of the darkening sky is beautiful.
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:13 PM
Deepest, heartfelt thanks, dear Hilda. :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 1:12 AM
Colourful string of haiku Evelyn, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
Buehler Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:12 PM
I deeply appreciate your kind congratulations, Tom. Blessings.
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