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Burnished Skies

Cloaking a Burnished Coppery Sky the darkness fully ebony black hides the blaze of silvery stars. Not a single twinkle could be seen. Then like a true goddess of light she rode out of the darkest black and her silvery beams conquered sending packing that bleak dark. Now released streaks of copper heighted and high lit her beams. Triumphant riding the starry night the Moon shone out in Full Glory.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/25/2015 3:21:00 PM
a beautiful discriptive write. a 7 hugs eve
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Date: 6/25/2015 10:38:00 AM
Shadow, this verse is very nice so visual and lovely 7 and thanks for visiting my haiku 9
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/25/2015 10:55:00 AM
ty Connie hugs
Date: 6/20/2015 1:38:00 PM
Your word choices are colorful, descriptive, and imaginative, creating an image in the mind of the reader. Emile.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/22/2015 5:20:00 AM
ty Emile hugs
Date: 6/16/2015 10:00:00 AM
wonderful imagery, my friend
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/17/2015 1:11:00 AM
ty Jack hugs
Date: 6/15/2015 2:48:00 AM
This is extremely brilliant penned, I enjoyed the read Shadow thanks for shared...............A.M.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/15/2015 5:56:00 PM
ty A.M hugs
Date: 6/13/2015 3:06:00 PM
beautiful scene in all its glory , shadow... love the imagery!.. huggs
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 6/15/2015 9:21:00 AM
SOUPIE!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/14/2015 4:39:00 PM
ty Nette hugs
Date: 6/13/2015 7:46:00 AM
First verse set the tone and last verse topped the poem off my friend. Super 7 on this one and enjoyed the read this fine day...
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/14/2015 4:38:00 PM
ty Robert hugs
Date: 6/12/2015 11:48:00 PM
Very descriptive, Shadow. I bet it would look great with a picture above it! It seems as if you were inspired by one!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/13/2015 6:14:00 AM
pure imagination Andrea hugs

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