Shadow Hamilton Poet Verse

Burnished Skies

Cloaking a Burnished Coppery Sky
the darkness fully ebony black
hides the blaze of silvery stars.
Not a single twinkle could be seen.

Then like a true goddess of light
she rode out of the darkest black
and her silvery beams conquered
sending packing that bleak dark.

Now released streaks of copper
heighted and high lit her beams. 
Triumphant riding the starry night
the Moon shone out in Full Glory.

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Eve Roper June 25, 2015 at 3:21 PM a beautiful discriptive write. a 7 hugs eve

Constance La France June 25, 2015 at 10:38 AM Shadow, this verse is very nice so visual and lovely 7 and thanks for visiting my haiku 9 Shadow Hamilton June 25, 2015 at 10:55 AM ty Connie hugs

Emile Pinet June 20, 2015 at 1:38 PM Your word choices are colorful, descriptive, and imaginative, creating an image in the mind of the reader. Emile. Shadow Hamilton June 22, 2015 at 5:20 AM ty Emile hugs

Jack Horne June 16, 2015 at 10:00 AM wonderful imagery, my friend Shadow Hamilton June 17, 2015 at 1:11 AM ty Jack hugs

Afolabi Muideen June 15, 2015 at 2:48 AM This is extremely brilliant penned, I enjoyed the read Shadow thanks for shared...............A.M. Shadow Hamilton June 15, 2015 at 5:56 PM ty A.M hugs

Nette Onclaud June 13, 2015 at 3:06 PM beautiful scene in all its glory , shadow... love the imagery!.. huggs Nette Onclaud June 15, 2015 at 9:21 AM SOUPIE! Shadow Hamilton June 14, 2015 at 4:39 PM ty Nette hugs

Robert Lindley June 13, 2015 at 7:46 AM First verse set the tone and last verse topped the poem off my friend. Super 7 on this one and enjoyed the read this fine day... Shadow Hamilton June 14, 2015 at 4:38 PM ty Robert hugs

Andrea Dietrich June 12, 2015 at 11:48 PM Very descriptive, Shadow. I bet it would look great with a picture above it! It seems as if you were inspired by one! Shadow Hamilton June 13, 2015 at 6:14 AM pure imagination Andrea hugs