Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

- Burning With Love -

Falling, laughing orange sunshine
   Warmly comforting beams caress
   I was blinded for a moment
   Lost searching faraway grace
   A color the Angels have ordained ?
   Butterflies dancing on each heartbeat
   I have to feel your tender touch
   Cotton fingertips electric sparks embrace
   The days they pass so quickly now
   Watching night and day pass 
   The splendid color of the sky
   Heavens purity through lens of one soul
   A blazing light upon the shores
   Golden treasure your light shines 
   All of God's creation, painted with his brush
   Rainbow misted angel tears a bouquet promise
   Of life, that seems almost too much
   Far beyond our human brain to explain
   Somewhere very near, just around the corner
   Hope dances with the never ending dream





   Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  11.09.2015

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Robert Lindley October 18, 2015 at 7:03 PM Another beautiful superb collaboration. "All of God's creation, painted with his brush Rainbow misted angel tears a bouquet promise" My favorite within the gem you two very talented poets created! A7

Gary Bateman September 22, 2015 at 7:05 AM Hello Liam and Anne-Lise!! A Most Outstanding collaboration here with superb imagery and a most wonderful flow among the verses. "Rainbow misted angel tears a bouquet promise," is one of many memorable gems in this exquisite free-verse write. Very Well-Done my two great friends!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Kim Van Breda September 21, 2015 at 3:45 PM This a beautifully written collaboration. The imagery is so vivid.. it shines and dances with every line. Excellent write Liam and Ann-Lise #7 ~~X~~

Dorian Petersen Potter September 20, 2015 at 6:38 PM Hi Liam n' Ann- Lise! Wow! A most beautiful, romantic and captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written! I truly enjoy it. A true golden gem!Just awesome!A very beautiful dreamy passionate sweet romantic love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.Just wonderful!I love it! Very enchanting.Great imagery! Excellent collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 to each!A Fav!Sending you my prayers Liam.Keep your Faith!Thank you for posting this very beautiful poem in your page too Liam.I'm so happy you did:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^