Rama Balasubramanian Poet Tetractys

Burning Trees

Trees
burning,
carpet of 
embers on ground;
mesmerized I rake the leaves, put them in
a basket. Even in death there is glee.
Detachment of
tree inspires
me, brings
joy.

31.08.2021
For Eve Rooper Tetractys contest
Syllables checked at PS
Photo used 3

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Joanna Daniel September 2, 2021 at 1:09 AM Love the first four lines, Rama, I too brought out the same image:) all the best:) you write well:) I am honoured that you think high of my humble writings:)

Beryl Edmonds August 31, 2021 at 3:08 PM Love the colourful autumn leaves when they lay in a carpet o’er the ground. A lovely double Tetractys. Best wishes Rama… Belle

Darlene De Beaulieu August 31, 2021 at 12:06 PM Hello Rama, the colors of the leaves are beautiful in the Fall season. Until the raking of the leaves begin it is an endless job. Blessing my friend.