Burning Star

Oh baby 
these eyes fell down 
you're amazing beautiful body 
Tingling with warm liquid gold 
slowly began melting in fingers 
chocolate over soft velvet sweet honey 
I began dreaming undressing 
deep inside with burning hot desire 
Shimmering light of candle 
stirring passion flickering memory
gentle kisses burning embers
In the fire ultra warm
sizzling dreaming hot 
touches inside desiring love
Once upon a time begins 
our enchanting fairy tale dream 
From out of the deepest forests 
walking on these sands footprints 
forever and always will remain special
Left in the heart touching beats
wishing you were here right now 
A star shining 
catching you inside the magic dust 
charming precious held 
Within a breath of silver thought priceless
silken wrapped gifted treasuring gem 
Faraway whispers sweetly 
in silver breaths of air blowing
carried over the moon and back whistling
Echoes sweetly over the hill through the valleys  
far beyond time unraveling truth over beauty
almost felt I was making love to you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/21/2014 7:19:00 PM
Liam, this is such a hot write! I love your lines: out of the deepest forests and the magic dust. Dreamy and wishful dear friend great write! Meg
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Date: 12/21/2014 4:40:00 AM
- Liam my friend, what a beautiful poem -Burning Star - (love the title) - A poem that really deserve a "7" - Thanks for all the beautiful poems you've shared with me, and thanks for those we've written together - I'm glad that I have met wonderful people here, like you Liam - The time is here to wish you and your family a beautiful and peaceful Christmas holidays with your family and good friends - Bless you my friend! - This Christmas hug coming from me to you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/20/2014 6:51:00 PM
This is a wonderful write my friend I enjoyed it a lot, simply put very cool my friend, glad you enjoyed my poem so much you have a very merry christmas my friend and I hope you have a geat new year two, cheri
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Date: 12/20/2014 1:42:00 PM
Liam Mate!! This one's a keeper for sure. Such a special and so tremendous write indeed -- so powerful and with such marvelous imagery!! You've made the "Leprechaun Choir of Elves" so proud Mate!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 12/19/2014 10:30:00 PM
What a tremendous silvery write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this astounding poem here this evening! You have portrayed a beautiful piece with ultimate skill. Free verse suits you well! What a grandiose poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 12/19/2014 9:16:00 PM
That was wonderful. Love your imagery! :)
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Date: 12/19/2014 6:38:00 PM
Wow! This is a most beautiful, romantic and sensual love poem Liam. Just wonderful! Another dazzling gem! So full of love and tenderness and passion, one to be held very close to ones heart, my dearest friend. A solid 7 +++ for you! Keep your faith hopes and dreams alive and always! Merry Christmas to you and your dear family! Have a very wonderful evening! And God and his angels be with you always guiding you protecting you! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxD."
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Date: 12/19/2014 4:08:00 PM
wow, liam.. you got my full attention.., grrreat love song!.. huggs
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