Burning Sensation of the Soul In Fury

Woe unto you! a miserable acquaintance, it seems you want to taste the unpleasant half of me and toil in the inferno of my anger. Get up and leave! because I burn and yearn to inflict misery and disaster. As you go, pick up with you what is left of our union. The same Sun which provides nourishment to the flower can equally burn its beautiful petals and dry its stalk. The same water which enriches the Earth can swallow all its belongings when tried and tested. The same dog, attractive, loyal and humble can become a raging storm to its master in madness. Any bond we have at all I want to break up and the fire you've ignited, I want to build up. My anger will catch up with you as you've used up to fullness the cup of my patience. Placing my evil wand on your inner organs to stay forever itchy and a curse on you, directly from hell making the hole of your under to stay forever moist The rusting of your senses is my pleasure and the drying up of your vitamins my trophy I'll shatter your well being into strands and pull them out piece by piece b'cos my compassion on you is now on a lock down My every word is a syrup of poison their effect; nothing can cover up not even the best make up. As I wish to set you up and cause your downfall. I line up the soldiers of your torment and mix up your blessings with curses. As intense as this may be they are mere words from the lips of my anger uttered just some minutes ago. Come and dine with me Cos now, I'm calm. As we eat our meal and share from the same bottle of friendship while you forget these words and forgive my soul.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx The million dollar question is........ Can you forget these words, if said to you?

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Date: 11/23/2013 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Funom for your comment on my poem. this piece is more real than just a poem though sometimes we think less of ourselves less when we make outburst at life and turn docile the next minute a calm sanctuary is a sound way of life. Nice imagery.
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Date: 11/25/2013 9:55:00 AM
Thanks Lucas
Date: 11/22/2013 4:03:00 PM
The answer is yes, providing I know that the persons heart has changed. This is well expressed. Within love sometimes both positive and negative feelings can be expressed. What is acted out is of most consequence.
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Date: 11/25/2013 9:54:00 AM
Thanks for the comment Richard
Date: 11/22/2013 11:29:00 AM
A very emotional... and passionate poem... Well done... I think we've all felt like this at times... But couln't find the words to express it.
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/22/2013 11:50:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comment Carol Eastman
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