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Burning Passion

Touching fingers off deep fire melting tips sweetly burning brushes inside warmly walls Within four chambers echoes whispering silently softly desires warm when skipping a beat Oh you talk the words of the sweetest golden honey intoxicating mead The drunken spirit dancing swoons just in thoughts alone In what you said darling I blame you smiling you're a regal beauty Whom I will kiss hovering gently over your fingertips softly holding one's vision A flame left under the silver moon dancing with you're shadow of my soul one firefly beaming beautiful In the night sky a light from you shines in each passing new moon takes a step closer just to know all the right words to say darling I'll kiss you till you're calm and then you would be mine.. or maybe i'll wait for the star to shine upon that beautiful day

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Date: 11/7/2014 6:27:00 PM
Liam Me Irish Mate . . . A most beautiful and wonderful piece here my friend. The Leprechauns are a smil'n on this one!! Cheers, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 9:07:00 AM
oh if only they were pal these are old ones i wrote for someone very special to me thank you so kindly garry bless you
Date: 11/4/2014 4:47:00 PM
So soft sweet and beautiful...A great pen my friend..
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/4/2014 4:57:00 PM
thank you tim smiling dear friend beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated
Date: 11/4/2014 8:39:00 AM
Wow! Liam, my dear friend, You got a very beautiful and loving poetic piece here. so much love in this poem. A 7 for you! Take care! Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/4/2014 2:59:00 PM
so sweet of you dorian deeply beautiful comment thank you kindly dear friend you also take care bless you pal
Date: 11/4/2014 8:01:00 AM
We all need that friend,lover,husband,or any other someone special in our life who is right there with the right words at the right time. Hope I always manage to be in the life of those I love when they need me.Beautiful message un tour beautiful poem.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/4/2014 2:53:00 PM
your a pal charmaine truly warm beautiful comment thank you dear friend sending you a auld irish blessing heartfelt appreciated

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