Burning Passion

Touching fingers off 
deep fire melting tips 
sweetly burning brushes 
inside warmly walls 
Within four chambers 
echoes whispering silently 
softly desires warm when skipping a beat 

Oh you talk the words 
of the sweetest golden honey 
intoxicating mead 
The drunken spirit dancing 
swoons just in thoughts alone 
In what you said darling 
I blame you smiling 
you're a regal beauty 

Whom I will kiss 
hovering gently over your fingertips 
softly holding one's vision 
A flame left under the silver moon 
dancing with you're shadow of my soul 
one firefly beaming beautiful 

In the night sky a light from you 
shines in each passing new moon 
takes a step closer 
just to know all the right words to say darling 
I'll kiss you till you're calm and then you would be mine.. 
or maybe i'll wait for the star 
to shine upon that beautiful day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 11/7/2014 6:27:00 PM
Liam Me Irish Mate . . . A most beautiful and wonderful piece here my friend. The Leprechauns are a smil'n on this one!! Cheers, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 9:07:00 AM
oh if only they were pal these are old ones i wrote for someone very special to me thank you so kindly garry bless you
Date: 11/4/2014 4:47:00 PM
So soft sweet and beautiful...A great pen my friend..
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/4/2014 4:57:00 PM
thank you tim smiling dear friend beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated
Date: 11/4/2014 8:39:00 AM
Wow! Liam, my dear friend, You got a very beautiful and loving poetic piece here. so much love in this poem. A 7 for you! Take care! Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/4/2014 2:59:00 PM
so sweet of you dorian deeply beautiful comment thank you kindly dear friend you also take care bless you pal
Date: 11/4/2014 8:01:00 AM
We all need that friend,lover,husband,or any other someone special in our life who is right there with the right words at the right time. Hope I always manage to be in the life of those I love when they need me.Beautiful message un tour beautiful poem.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/4/2014 2:53:00 PM
your a pal charmaine truly warm beautiful comment thank you dear friend sending you a auld irish blessing heartfelt appreciated
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