Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Haiku

Burning Passion

Burning passion



Passion in heart burns,
Throe follows the last supper,
Invisible fumes !



Haiku- 5/7/5
Written September 22nd, 2014
For contest 'Creative haiku' by Charlotte Puddifoo

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Paul Callus September 23, 2014 at 4:43 PM Very creative and excellent haiku, Upma. In my eyes it flies high! // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans September 23, 2014 at 4:03 PM Nicely done Haiku Dr. Sharma.

Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2014 at 11:39 PM gosh you are on a passion streak!!! Hope this one does well too, dear.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 22, 2014 at 9:28 AM love the image and the last phrase... :)

Dr.Ram Mehta September 22, 2014 at 9:04 AM creative one and should rank high in the contest, Dr. Upma

Demetrios Trifiatis September 22, 2014 at 4:26 AM Invisible fumes, indeed, that our whole being consume! Fantastic writing coming out of deep knowledge, Dr. Upma. Very dynamic, a seven! Good luck! Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 22, 2014 at 4:28 AM Thnx Demetrios my good friend! glad to hv ur visit n a super score!