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Burning Passion

Burning passion Passion in heart burns, Throe follows the last supper, Invisible fumes ! Haiku- 5/7/5 Written September 22nd, 2014 For contest 'Creative haiku' by Charlotte Puddifoo

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Date: 9/23/2014 4:43:00 PM
Very creative and excellent haiku, Upma. In my eyes it flies high! // paul
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Date: 9/23/2014 4:03:00 PM
Nicely done Haiku Dr. Sharma.
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Date: 9/22/2014 11:39:00 PM
gosh you are on a passion streak!!! Hope this one does well too, dear.
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Date: 9/22/2014 9:28:00 AM
love the image and the last phrase... :)
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Date: 9/22/2014 9:04:00 AM
creative one and should rank high in the contest, Dr. Upma
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Date: 9/22/2014 4:26:00 AM
Invisible fumes, indeed, that our whole being consume! Fantastic writing coming out of deep knowledge, Dr. Upma. Very dynamic, a seven! Good luck!
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Date: 9/22/2014 4:28:00 AM
Thnx Demetrios my good friend! glad to hv ur visit n a super score!