Burning In the Night

You're my lover, like no other.
and it always feels so right.
You're my fire, my desire
and we're burning in the night.

Baby, when you smile at me
I feel this flame consuming me.
Baby when you're kissing me
It sparks the fire instantly.

The whole world feel just right 
when we're burning in the night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 8, 2016 at 1:22 PM
DORY, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 6:50 PM
Oh, la la, Dory, NICE!!!
Kendrick Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 2:05 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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October 14, 2010 at 7:31 AM
Congratulations on your honorable Mention in Catie's Fanning the Embers Comp love Jayne sorry for the late congrates
Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 2:05 PM
congrats on your HM in the contest with this lovely entry
Freeman Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 12:03 PM
Excellent rhying verse Dory, way to go girl. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 9:48 AM
Congratulations Dory on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Fanning The Embers". Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 5:07 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Dory
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October 7, 2010 at 7:35 PM
Congrats Dory on your HM in Catie's contest with this wonderful entry luv.. enjoy your special honor tonight...
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