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Burning In the Night

You're my lover, like no other. and it always feels so right. You're my fire, my desire and we're burning in the night. Baby, when you smile at me I feel this flame consuming me. Baby when you're kissing me It sparks the fire instantly. The whole world feel just right when we're burning in the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/8/2016 1:22:00 PM
DORY, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 10/20/2010 6:50:00 PM
Oh, la la, Dory, NICE!!!
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Date: 10/16/2010 2:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/14/2010 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your honorable Mention in Catie's Fanning the Embers Comp love Jayne sorry for the late congrates
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Date: 10/9/2010 2:05:00 PM
congrats on your HM in the contest with this lovely entry
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Date: 10/8/2010 12:03:00 PM
Excellent rhying verse Dory, way to go girl. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/8/2010 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations Dory on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Fanning The Embers". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:07:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Dory
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Date: 10/7/2010 7:35:00 PM
Congrats Dory on your HM in Catie's contest with this wonderful entry luv.. enjoy your special honor tonight...
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