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Burning Embers

Love begins like fire
Stirring flames of desire
Two souls smoldering
Among ashes glowing
Leaving embers burning

©Donna Jones

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John Posey

March 6, 2013 at 3:33 PM

Such talent deserves many accolades. Well deserved win..... Jake

Donna Jones

March 6, 2013 at 4:51 PM

Thanks Jake....:-)

Connie Gildersleeve

February 22, 2013 at 8:01 AM

Congrats on your well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Donna Jones

February 22, 2013 at 2:18 PM

Thanks again connie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

February 22, 2013 at 12:50 AM

Hi congratulations Donna luv, this is a lovely write and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

Donna Jones

February 22, 2013 at 2:21 PM

More than enough thanks....much appreciated...

Joyce Johnson

February 22, 2013 at 12:04 AM

Congratulations on your win, Donna. Love, Joyce

Donna Jones

February 22, 2013 at 2:22 PM

Thanks Joyce....blessings

Joseph May

February 21, 2013 at 7:09 PM

congrats on your win Donna

Donna Jones

February 22, 2013 at 2:22 PM

:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) thanks....

Debra Squyres

February 21, 2013 at 5:45 PM

Short and enduring as love should be !! Congrats on your win !!

Donna Jones

February 21, 2013 at 6:25 PM

Thanks. :-)

Poet Destroyer A

February 21, 2013 at 5:12 PM

Hi Donna, congratulations! in Gail's "Burning Embers " contest.. a delightful burring poem.. always~ PD

Donna Jones

February 21, 2013 at 6:26 PM

Thanks :-)

Debbie Duncan

February 13, 2013 at 12:41 PM

This is very nice Donna, thank you for reading my "bible Stories" Genesis 6, job 1:6 and other places. You have a great day ;}

Donna Jones

February 13, 2013 at 3:45 PM

Thank you Debbie...likewise...looking forward to many more...

Robert Johnson

February 13, 2013 at 12:07 PM

Flame on! Sounds so gay. You know what I mean. :) Keep them home fires burning. Peace.

Donna Jones

February 13, 2013 at 3:46 PM

Burning embers.. oh the good old days...

Sara Kendrick

February 5, 2013 at 5:00 AM

Very descriptive of new love..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, my Haiku was written from a life sighting..Sara

Donna Jones

February 5, 2013 at 11:09 AM

Thanks for stopping by as well...I find this challenging given a title and subject.... different for me so thanks

Rollo West

February 4, 2013 at 11:05 PM

Hi Donna, this is really very good, with great imagery. Thank you for commenting on my write. Rollo

Donna Jones

February 5, 2013 at 11:10 AM

Thank you as well sir....look forward to reading much more of your work

James Marshall Goff

February 4, 2013 at 8:05 PM

Nice! Donna!

Donna Jones

February 4, 2013 at 9:34 PM

I find these poems tough to write when given a title to use and theme so thanks!

Russell Sivey

February 4, 2013 at 3:29 PM

I love this short verse, an exceptional write my friend! Your poem is on fire, as is the love you express! Quite the amazing piece, Great Work!!

Donna Jones

February 4, 2013 at 3:41 PM

Don't know if first reply went through....so thanks so much

Donna Jones

February 4, 2013 at 3:34 PM

Thanks so much....

Donna Jones

February 4, 2013 at 3:32 PM

Well...let us hope everyone has experienced this at least once. Lol back...see I can't even stay away a few hours! What am I gonna do?

Jack Ellison

February 4, 2013 at 3:27 PM

You so brilliantly described TRUE love my dear Donna! How come you're such a sage on the subject! LOL Hugs, Jack xox

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