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Burning Embers 

Love begins like fire
Stirring flames of desire
Two souls smoldering
Among ashes glowing
Leaving embers burning

©Donna Jones

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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John Posey
Date: 3/6/2013 3:33:00 PM
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Such talent deserves many accolades. Well deserved win..... Jake
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Donna Jones
Date: 3/6/2013 4:51:00 PM
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Thanks Jake....:-)
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/22/2013 8:01:00 AM
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Congrats on your well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/22/2013 2:18:00 PM
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Thanks again connie
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/22/2013 12:50:00 AM
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Hi congratulations Donna luv, this is a lovely write and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/22/2013 2:21:00 PM
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More than enough thanks....much appreciated...
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Joyce Johnson
Date: 2/22/2013 12:04:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win, Donna. Love, Joyce
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/22/2013 2:22:00 PM
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Thanks Joyce....blessings
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Joseph May
Date: 2/21/2013 7:09:00 PM
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congrats on your win Donna
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/22/2013 2:22:00 PM
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:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) thanks....
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Debra Squyres
Date: 2/21/2013 5:45:00 PM
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Short and enduring as love should be !! Congrats on your win !!
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/21/2013 6:25:00 PM
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Thanks. :-)
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Date: 2/21/2013 5:12:00 PM
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Hi Donna, congratulations! in Gail's "Burning Embers " contest.. a delightful burring poem.. always~ PD
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/21/2013 6:26:00 PM
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Thanks :-)
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 2/13/2013 12:41:00 PM
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This is very nice Donna, thank you for reading my "bible Stories" Genesis 6, job 1:6 and other places. You have a great day ;}
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/13/2013 3:45:00 PM
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Thank you Debbie...likewise...looking forward to many more...
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Robert Johnson
Date: 2/13/2013 12:07:00 PM
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Flame on! Sounds so gay. You know what I mean. :) Keep them home fires burning. Peace.
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/13/2013 3:46:00 PM
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Burning embers.. oh the good old days...
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/5/2013 5:00:00 AM
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Very descriptive of new love..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, my Haiku was written from a life sighting..Sara
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/5/2013 11:09:00 AM
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Thanks for stopping by as well...I find this challenging given a title and subject.... different for me so thanks
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Rollo West
Date: 2/4/2013 11:05:00 PM
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Hi Donna, this is really very good, with great imagery. Thank you for commenting on my write. Rollo
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/5/2013 11:10:00 AM
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Thank you as well sir....look forward to reading much more of your work
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/4/2013 8:05:00 PM
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Nice! Donna!
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/4/2013 9:34:00 PM
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I find these poems tough to write when given a title to use and theme so thanks!
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Russell Sivey
Date: 2/4/2013 3:29:00 PM
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I love this short verse, an exceptional write my friend! Your poem is on fire, as is the love you express! Quite the amazing piece, Great Work!!
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/4/2013 3:41:00 PM
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Don't know if first reply went through....so thanks so much
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/4/2013 3:34:00 PM
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Thanks so much....
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/4/2013 3:32:00 PM
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Well...let us hope everyone has experienced this at least once. Lol back...see I can't even stay away a few hours! What am I gonna do?
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/4/2013 3:27:00 PM
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You so brilliantly described TRUE love my dear Donna! How come you're such a sage on the subject! LOL Hugs, Jack xox
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