Burning Desires

Stuck in this position
Should she trust her intuition? 

Discovering her true desires
They burn inside like a thousand fires

Always believing in fate
Trusting she would find her true soul mate

A hopeless romantic at heart
Never wanting to be apart

Knowing now she has found her true love
Just like two beautiful white doves

Yet she can not help but fear, my dear
That in his heart, they are worlds apart

She has been looking forward to that magical day
Now she is left speechless not knowing what to say

Convinced you were the one
We used to have so much fun

Once dreaming of a beautiful white dress
Now everything is one great big mess

Planning that romantic day since I was a kid
I just can not figure out what wrong to you I did

I just want to be with you
So one day we can say I do

Feels just like Murphy's Law
Do I have some fatal flaw?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcdaid Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 3:13 AM
so very beautifully painted picture excellent pen
Orozco Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 5:45 PM
Well written. I too wonder sometimes how long i must wait until i find my soul mate =)-ed
Sathasivam Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 7:27 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Smith Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 7:00 PM
Hope the dream isn't bigger than reality....excellent pen Raina ......hugs Tim
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