Burning Daylight What Does It Mean

BURNING DAYLIGHT by Kevin L Fairbrother

Burning Daylight what ever does it mean
Could be about your daily routine
Or the hours you work from daylight to dusk
Maybe it means how you use the daylight hours
For your own satisfaction and well-being
…
To me it’s about crawling out of bed 
After a restless night sleep from the heat
As evident from the crumpled and soaked sheets
As I greet the burning sun’s rays that announce the new day
…
Have to face the new day of heat, dust and flies
What-ever the weather there is work to be done
So it’s on with the shorts, t-shirt and wide brimmed hat
And a liberal smothering of sun screen with high UV
…
Gather my pack of bottled water then on my bike with dogs in tow
Down to the long paddock to gather the sheep
Already the shimmering horizon beggar's belief
For the hot dry wind burns the air I’m trying to breathe
…
Burning daylight it’s like the earth is on fire
For it saps my energy, dulls my brain and sweat rolls off
Man and dog must be crazy to be burning daylight in this heat
As the temperature climbs to well above 50 degrees
…
No shade and no relief from the creek that has run dry
With the dogs panting we gather the sheep and lambs
And push on to the homestead and out of the heat dust and flies
For there will be shelter, shade and cool water to drink
…
I sit on the porch the dog at my feet and enjoy a feed and a drink
As the daylight hours fade away to a night sky
But there is no relief for the heat still lingers and burns
I know I will be facing the burning of daylight hours yet again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/13/2015 1:32:00 PM
Hi Kevin: Your poem created the epitome of heated days. I could almost feel the heat from your descriptive poem. great Write!
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Kevin Fairbrother
Date: 2/20/2016 6:23:00 PM
Thanks Mate, Mother Nature can be cruel at times, cheers
Date: 6/13/2015 8:22:00 PM
Hi Kev: This brings back the feeling of those hot days. Amazing how boiling the billy could make you feel cooler than drinking ice water. The cooling effects of sweating...lol My CAPTCHA code for this one is EWE...how silly is that?
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/30/2015 1:26:00 PM
Have a wonderful New Year: Kevin. Much aloha from SuZ
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Kevin Fairbrother
Date: 12/7/2015 11:28:00 PM
Thanks Suzanne, EWE have a wonderful day, in the shade under the fernery glade, with a glass of lemon on ice and you will close yours eyes and the heat will disipate. Cheers Kev
Date: 5/26/2015 9:54:00 PM
Your poem is a great take on the theme of "burning daylight," Kevin. Very descriptive and I could feel the unbearable heat in your imagery. Congratulations on your win int he contest! Sandra
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Kevin Fairbrother
Date: 12/7/2015 11:16:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, glad you enjoyed the imagery but be thankful you don't have to live and work in it. Cheers Kev
Date: 5/26/2015 1:12:00 AM
This is fantastic! I love the image it gives!
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Kevin Fairbrother
Date: 12/7/2015 11:14:00 PM
Thanks Mate, Mother Nature does put the skids under us sometimes and we have to take stock and not push the boundries. Cheers Kev
Date: 5/25/2015 5:34:00 PM
Hi Kevin, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA
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Kevin Fairbrother
Date: 12/7/2015 11:11:00 PM
Hey Linda, thanks, you have a good day cheers Kev
Date: 5/25/2015 1:23:00 AM
Kevin, Congrats on your BURNING DAYLIGHT win. SKAT
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Kevin Fairbrother
Date: 12/7/2015 11:10:00 PM
Thanks heaps, love your work to, cheers Kev
Date: 5/24/2015 7:27:00 PM
Kevin, sometimes in our "air conditioned" worlds we forget that there are men and women "out there" busting their humps. I especially enjoyed this one as I spent 35 years working outdoors in all kinds of weather. Stay strong(and hydrated).
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Kevin Fairbrother
Date: 12/7/2015 11:09:00 PM
Thank-you John for your input and yes most days it is a struggle but one has to soldier on and get the job done, cheers Mate
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