thriveni c mysore Poet Shape

burning candles

        air                            I    
     yellow                       pray      
       blue                        faith
     gravity                      hope
hydrocarbons               spiritual
 combustion                guidance        
 vaporization               devotion

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Karen Jones April 9, 2025 at 12:18 PM Cool and refreshingly unique! thriveni c mysore April 9, 2025 at 9:34 PM You are kind with words dear friend, thank you, keeps me afloat. thank you for your pleasant visit dear poet.

Trina Layne April 9, 2025 at 8:53 AM Congratulations, fellow scribe! Each time I see one, I am encouraged to give the Shapes another go. Thanks for sharing this. thriveni c mysore April 9, 2025 at 9:32 PM Thank you dear friend for your kind visit and words. I am glad you liked this write dear poet, thank you.