Burning Candle
Body ‘s a burning candle, breath ’s oxygen
Mind ‘s a traffic-flow of thoughts
smile ‘s inspiration
Concentration ‘s discipline, ideas ‘re sparks
Silence is a glow that lights up the path
Awareness comes from introspection
Perseverance leads to wisdom
Surrender brings true freedom
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